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Walter Poe
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0 posted 2002-11-06 03:54 AM


Hi my names Walter
The dark poet on call here
I love writing words in
a way many people do not care

Lots of alcohol and no sleep
makes minds just like Hells Keep
While Milk with wine combined
will loose Passions Unrefined

Friends Lovers, Strangers
Gather round I'll amaze you

Take a good look at my face
Well, don't my smile look out of  place
look a little closer its easy to trace
The tracks of my tears

© Copyright 2002 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-06 09:57 AM


a sad commentary---

that last stanza, which may, actually, be your signature as it looks to be a different sized font
is extremely powerful and vivid

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2002-11-06 09:57 AM


what is this challenge...

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3 posted 2002-11-06 11:48 AM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, this is a wonderful challenge well-done but yet so sad, sweet friend, I hope all is alright and I send angel hugs of comfort your way! (sigh) You are a marvelous writer and inspiration to many, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walter, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-11-06 04:24 PM


I'm impresssed! That was a good poem. I have underestimated this site!
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5 posted 2002-11-06 04:26 PM


Wait, you did the challenge twice! Oh well, they were both really good.

"Sticks and stones will break my bones,
But words will break my heart"

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