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Connel
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0 posted 2002-11-05 10:21 PM


The dogs fly with birds,
and my cat jumps high.
This poem is very crazy,
because I want some pie!

Everything outside are always dumb.
cuz I gotta computer right there.
Things I write can be posted once.
That tis why you don't take a challenge!


It make hardly any sense.. and It sucks.. but it was your challenge...

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

© Copyright 2002 Chris DeVore - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-05 10:37 PM




(smiles) Oh Chris, I love this, this follows the challenge so well and when you shouldn't say a word you should certainty take that seriously! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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2 posted 2002-11-06 07:39 AM


Hey I understand, I nearly died after I wrote mine... Good job, I don't see any repeated words in here.
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3 posted 2002-11-06 07:42 AM


Connel, I like the way you write with such honesty...and then put your little expanation at the end. That's cute.

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-06-2002 07:42 AM).]

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4 posted 2002-11-06 07:48 AM


The challenge was met so well and I don't think it's bad at all considering it is not an easy challenge.  
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