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Finding Might
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Finding Might |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
The helm of night is depthened dight in mettle prest and toward might fixed eyes glance thro visor of dark informed with time and boldly spark whose staring fires deeply engage thro phases of passion and rage And tours make, thro peering strife thro battles long, spillings of life to ghosts errant whose peals smite on the ear and soul until the dawn. The sight they hold they wield most bold in such a weary world enrolled. nightmare to daymare continues struggle upon struggle renews; Yet shine thro with a peircing truth and never look without some ruth. Thus guiding through the moments grave the eyes their soul do brightly save faring through darkness to the light in seeing thus is finding might. [This message has been edited by Essorant (11-05-2002 10:08 PM).] |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
the diction is very unusal and I found it to be quite cool you switch from thro to through part way through and it is bad form. otherwise you really captured me. even when the words did not register discreetly the feelings and images created a world in my mind. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Essorant, this is wonderful, sweet friend, yes, always look to the light for there strength is abundant and He will consume your soul with the love you need to carry on! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Essorant, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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