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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-11-05 07:42 PM



Fully right now the thought of
walking on damp earth, barefoot
brings pleasant thoughts to mind.

Long ago times of childhood
out after dark tagging along
as my older brother hunted
for worms in summer.

What a joy this was for me
though right now
I can't think of a reason
why it should have been, yet
I know it was.

And it was the feel of the dirt
of the grass wet with rain
upon my barefeet, as I just
kind of lagged behind not really
watching as he pulled the little
worms out of the ground.

Funny how back then I never
worried about stepping on one
of them little worms, but now
it just kind of makes me feel
creepy.

But back then, it was magical
the darkness of the night
falling upon brother and sister
under a dark, star riddled sky
the flashlight beam showing mist
in air, as it pointed there,
where life wiggled in the lawn.
A special time of innocence
that I remember with fondness
of thought, upon barefoot girls
and wet cool earth between the toes.

WhiteRose 11/05/02

"my reflection becomes me"

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
regards2you
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1 posted 2002-11-05 07:54 PM



Well, you captured that memory perfectly, and yes, it was so special, though I was the one picking the worms to sell them the next day at a road side stand. And, yes, shoes were out of the question. Squish squish....
so much fun!

Thanks for this.

Warm Regards,
Pat


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majnu
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2 posted 2002-11-05 10:12 PM


a beautiful memory dear. reads like a journal entry in verse. the lack of form and rhyme, and the choice of simple pastoral words was perfect. seriously one of my faves from you.


let me know when the other board get back to normal, eh?

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3 posted 2002-11-05 10:43 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I just love this memory, sweet friend, I remember the feeling of running in the sprinklers as a little boy and still feel it today! (kiss on cheek) Such soft moments fill your words, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Martie
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4 posted 2002-11-05 10:45 PM


WhiteRose

Such memories I think, are just photos of love in stages, colored by the earth, when even a worm is beautiful.

WhiteRose
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5 posted 2002-11-06 12:20 PM


Pat, thanks so much for reading and responding. Today I wouldn't dream of crossing the grass here in the south without shoes. Fire ants, OUCH!

majnu, things have settled down. Glad you liked this one.

Noah, thank you so much for always reading and responding.

Martie, What a lovely response. Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed my picture of the past.

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (11-06-2002 12:21 AM).]

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6 posted 2002-11-06 10:57 AM


I love this, Rosie... and the memories it evokes. *G* Of course, we always had at least a few chickens running loose... and cows and horses and... well, let's just say that watching where those bare feet went was highly recommended! LOL
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