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SeanD
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since 2002-11-02
Posts 12


0 posted 2002-11-05 06:59 PM


yes i know, im punned as a love poet so far. yet, what love does to you or makes you feel within a reaction is also words to remember. Here it is :

The emptiness and darkness is returning,
that lonely feeling; the heart is burning.
Once, I pushed those feelings away,
they were gone for awhile, they're back today.
This time could be the end for me,
I could finally be gone-my sad soul set free.
The empty hollowness in my chest gone forever,
could it happen? please? no-never!
I was so happy for a long time there,
the pain disappeared, ran off somewhere.
It didn't go too far, found its way back,
right when my life was finally on track.
Finally I've come to a harsh conclusion,
all my hopes and dreams have been an illusion.
So much heartache, pain and strife,
what I want is to end this life.
That won't happen, I'm not brave enough,
tell me why this life has to be so rough.
Your help, dear Lord, is what I need,
nobody knows how my heart does bleed.
Everything’s piling up, I'm quickly sinking,
no rope to grab is what I'm thinking...

[This message has been edited by SeanD (11-05-2002 07:02 PM).]

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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-11-05 09:56 PM


Sean,
theres always a rope, and that rope is friends on this site.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Faye
Junior Member
since 2002-11-04
Posts 14
The world of Dreams&Memories
2 posted 2002-11-05 10:03 PM


"Everything’s piling up, I'm quickly sinking,
no rope to grab is what I'm thinking..."
   Its what your thinking...but your not sure...

majnu
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since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088
SF Bay Area
3 posted 2002-11-05 10:06 PM


keep your guts man. use this site to vent and talk to people who understand and want to listen. there is always a rope if you will yourself to find it.
Mistletoe Angel
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since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
4 posted 2002-11-05 10:48 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Sean, believe me, I used to have these feelings all throughout my boyhood, I used to feel no one would ever loved me and I was born to be heartbroken, but as I went on I have found this place, filled with wonderful friends, and we are all proud of you and will always hand you this rope! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send angel hugs of comfort your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sean, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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