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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2002-11-05 03:59 PM



The spirit joy in trait of male
Like Peter Pan in wind prevail
To soar and shear by lift and veer
Then joy must be of man I fear

And mystery in trait of she
Emotions well in depths of sea
To limitless and fathoms far
Then mystery all women are

These two ordained by moon in chance
The wind and sea in kind enhance
To breeze these depths and waves remit
Then moistly do these two commit

The thought combine this spirit love
To blend the essence from above
To soar and rain in ecstasy
As wind and water, he and she

Copyright Kkh 11/4/02

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-05 04:09 PM



Kathleen!  A keeper!  Oh my...and I know a few who won't want to miss this one!

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2 posted 2002-11-05 04:13 PM



How very creative. I enjoyed this a great deal.

Warm Regards,
Pat


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3 posted 2002-11-05 04:19 PM


oh! I DO love this! a keeper, to say the least! Thanks to Karilea for sending it my way!! My time on has been so short lately, I am so glad to have this sent to me! This is a definate favorite of mine....
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4 posted 2002-11-05 04:58 PM


The sea...
churning, roiling..
as wind and water
mix...

The mind..
running...flowing
of wind and water
to fix..

Hark Matey,  to starboard now.
See the mighty winds blow.
Hark Matey,  show them how
a sailor sails and goes..

To ships, to sail the ocean blue
upon the crest of wave..
To find the maid of wind or sea
to find,  to keep and save..

Beautiful poem Kathy...wind and water..
what a combo..

[This message has been edited by Magnus (11-05-2002 05:48 PM).]

SmartChick
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5 posted 2002-11-05 05:05 PM


The is a very beautiful poem. Also a keeper!
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6 posted 2002-11-05 05:42 PM


Well, there is no way I'm not saving this beauty. Oh, this has simply swept me away........

The ingredients in this mix are deliciousously tantalyzing....

EA


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7 posted 2002-11-05 06:58 PM


Beautiful Kathleen!!
A wonderful keeper to read over and over..
~Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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8 posted 2002-11-05 07:29 PM


Kathleen, this is so beautifully written and so unique. Very, very talented work. Thanks for sharing.

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel
                  

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9 posted 2002-11-05 07:36 PM


OOps, forgot to keep
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10 posted 2002-11-05 10:59 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is a true keeper, I love the spiritual courtship of these words as the breeze caresses the water like a maidens velvet glove, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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11 posted 2002-11-05 11:10 PM


ThisDiamond

A wonderous write...yes, amazing!

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