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Faye
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since 2002-11-04
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The world of Dreams&Memories

0 posted 2002-11-05 02:00 PM


We need a reason to hold on
To what we have
For when we have lost it
Nothing is good enough to please us

Why are our lives worth having, you ask
Life is nothing but one long task
A task to prove that your are something
But something in nothing is nothing but something

A reason to hold on
To what we have
For when we have lost it
Nothing will ever appease us

Why would you give up
Why stop now
For when life ends
Thats all you get

A reason to hold om
To what we have
For when we have lost it
Where do we lead our lives then?

© Copyright 2002 Faye - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2002-11-05 02:18 PM


I like to think that we lead our lives where our hearts go....
Very nice write.  Welcome to Passions!

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2002-11-05 03:10 PM



I'm enjoying the way your mind works, Faye...I'll continue to be reading you!

garysgirl
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3 posted 2002-11-05 03:16 PM


Faye, this is a very good poem. I loved your play with words in part of it. It was very interesting. Look forward to more of your work. Thanks for sharing.

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-05-2002 03:17 PM).]

secretlife
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4 posted 2002-11-05 03:31 PM


Nice poems...Great thoughts
Hugesss


Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-11-05 11:26 PM




(sigh) If the world was nothing but sacrifices, the world shouldn't be turning, so knowing it does rotate there is ambition to everything and logic to it all! (big hugggssssss)n This is a wonderfully thought-provoking poem, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Faye, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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