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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-11-05 12:59 PM



I fear now time standing still
for it deemed cliche would then
bury me in tedium of critical
speech upon speech of rhetoric.

So time, that which we measure
yet can never grasp. That which
causes us to grow old too fast.
That which beats out ticks of
tock, damn the clock as time need
stand still for a moments pause.

WhiteRose 11/04/02

"my reflection becomes me"

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-11-05 11:41 PM




(sigh) Funny how we can't feel the earth rotate yet we all know time is always constantly fleeting and moving and just one caesura can help us all regain our breath! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, this deserves a good bump, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Radrook
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2 posted 2002-11-06 05:36 AM


Time is the motion upon the stationary canvass of eternity.

Enjoyed the poem lovely lady!
God bless!

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2002-11-06 06:24 AM


Time, the endless wonder of the world......it gives so much and takes.
Very well done Rose, this is GREAT!

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4 posted 2002-11-06 07:39 AM


Anne, time does pass by so quickly, doesn't it??? (except in between times Gary and I are together.)

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel
                  

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