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Fields Of Forever
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Fields Of Forever |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Fields Of Forever We embark upon a journey as we put our pasts behind, seeking the future a destination yet unknown. In the shadows of what is yet to be we travel searching for the tomorrow of our dreams, walking not one in front or behind rather side by side. We journey over the valleys and hills of life struggling over seemingly unsurpassable mountains finally reaching the top. Our hearts beat as one while we gaze upon the horizons of eternity. Together we shall face the rivers that would consume us, and we shall triumph over the raging waters as we crawl upon the shore ragged and wet having faced life at her best but still we remain standing.  Take my hand and know in your heart that I will walk these ~fields of forever~ holding you cherished always *~*within my soul*~* 11-05-02 dmsmith If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... {On wings of words our spirits fly~ and our souls are free. ~me} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-05-2002 05:59 PM).] |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
This is very touching and heartfelt, Donna. Hugs, my friend.  The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very beautiful..somedays I believe I will never find that someone to walk beside me again, in life... M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very lovely Donna... Such a romantic write...much enjoyed. ~Hugs sweet poetess~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Take my hand and know in your heart that I will walk these ~fields of forever~ holding you cherished always *~*within my soul*~*"  (sigh) Awwwwww, I just love this, sweet friend, God Bless You, this had me singing Sting's "Fields of Gold" over and over in my head reading this, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a beautiful poem. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all for putting up with me whilst my mind rambles again. You are all appreciated. Hugs. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Side by side... yes! |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
That is one beautiful ramble. sigh* |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
An echo in my ear says thank you, dearly. etoodog |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Karilea, I don't think that there is any way to be but side by side, unless of course we feel that we can use the time being lead or that they wish to be lead for awhile........and that is a different story all in itself. Thank you and hugs to you. SE, I am glad that you enjoyed the rambles. You bless me with your words and for that I am grateful. Robert, and in return I say thank you and you are welcome. I am glad that you enjoyed. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
"Take my hand and know in your heart that I will walk these ~fields of forever~ holding you cherished always *~*within my soul*~* " Donna, this is my favorite part, though I loved it all, as usual with your poetry. Thanks for sharing. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ethel you are such a delight to have at Passions, and I am glad that you enjoyed this. Hugs. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetGentleSpirit~ Awwwwwwwww .... this is just so touching~ Must be 'something' about those Bill's, huh ?  May your fields of foreverly continue to bring you great happiness~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Margie.......yep........there sure does seem to be... Smiling here.......hugging you back. [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-07-2002 06:18 AM).] |
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