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Open Poetry #23

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majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

0 posted 2002-11-05 01:14 AM

Note to moderators. The system would not allow me to delete this thread so I simply deleted the peice. I have posted it in the Dark Poetry Forum as was suggested by Mysteria.

SEE DARK POETRY FOR THE POEM.

[This message has been edited by majnu (11-06-2002 11:57 AM).]

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2002-11-05 01:49 AM

Well now - that was sure an interesting read before I hit the hay. I can not say I like your friend Mephistopheles too much though. Excellent imagery and writing, and I feel your poem may have gotten more exposure in dark than in Open but I will check back on you to see if you got your title. I can't help you right now, it is all I can do to concentrate and keep saying "I will not have a nightmare, I will not have a nightmare." LOL. Great work.

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majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

2 posted 2002-11-05 11:37 AM

thanks. do you think maybe after a few more days, I could take it down from here and post it in the "dark poetry" area?

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