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Owl
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since 2002-10-28
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0 posted 2002-11-04 10:25 PM


Everyday i sleep with a certain fear,
thinking that i will not wake.
For sometimes i lie and can not move.
I see and hear whats surrounding me,
i can not speak back to the voices who call my name.

Minuites past, motion is returned,
i get up and run to see who has held me down.
I do not understand why this happens,
when i am home alone.

A year has past since i was so motionless,
a year since i heard that voice.
i remember the last thing it said to me,
"who are you?" had it asked.
And now that i think back,
i ask myself the same question.

"What one does, does for oneself" - Owl

© Copyright 2002 Enos Nicholas - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-04 10:30 PM




(sigh) Oh Enos, this is sooooooo wonderfully haunting, sweet friend, I think we all go through stages where we feel we never really knew ourselves but all it takes is the heart to take it too and be reassured who we are! (big hugggssssss) This is fabulous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Enos, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Faye
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since 2002-11-04
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2 posted 2002-11-04 10:32 PM


We are enigma... left to find ourselves... because no one can do it for us...
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2002-11-04 10:35 PM


Oh, I've been there....shivers just went up and down my spine!

So vivid! Surprise ending! Hoooooooo are you.....?

Welcome to Passions!

Earth Angel

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (11-04-2002 10:37 PM).]

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