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Wind
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0 posted 2002-11-04 08:58 PM



dROPS OF RAIN SPATTER OUTSIDE
EACH DROP dRIvEs ME CrAZY
iF i COULd hAVE ANYTHInG rIGHT nOW iT wOULD BE SOMETHING TO sTOP tHE rAIN

tHE hOUsE iS SO FULL oF fLyS i THInK I wILl DIE
uNLESS i DEStRoY EvERY oNE
oF ThOsE BUzzINg mENACES

THeRE aRE cATS aLL oVER MY wALLS
yOUWLNG aND SCREeChInG
i THiNK tHEy ARE AFTER mE
tHEY fOLLoW ME tO wORK aND tHEY wATCH mE AS i eAT

mY nEIgHbOrS THInK i AM cRAZy
bUT i KNOw THAt i aM nOT cRAZy
bECaUSe cRaZY pEOpLE hALLuCiNaTe
aND dO sTRANg tHINgS
aND ThE olNLy sTrANgE tHINGs i dID wERE
gEttINg dREssED aND cHASiNG cARS

[This message has been edited by Wind (11-04-2002 08:59 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-11-04 09:21 PM


LOL!.. that was pretty funny.. i cant believe you did my challenge.. heh... i didnt think anyone would..

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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2 posted 2002-11-04 09:43 PM


And who doesnt hallucenate and do odd things?
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3 posted 2002-11-04 10:01 PM


Hey welcome to both of you and thanks for reading my goofy idiotic poem (They are really usualy better than this, honest) Its pretty cool that Faye posted her first thing here, I allways wanted that! I look forward to reading stuff from both of you.
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4 posted 2002-11-04 10:34 PM




(sigh) Oh Liz, I didn't think this was goofy at all, poetry is supposed to be a nonsense thing that you understand and to bring out the insanity is an art that is matchless! (sigh) I love this, sweet friend, this is novel, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-11-09 08:29 AM


Just posting this because  forgot to add it to my library.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

dougsbird21
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6 posted 2002-11-09 08:35 AM


haha...it's good to use humor sometimes...not all poetry should be love, hate, or about freakin faeries and waterfalls!
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