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Open Poetry #23

Go! Be Free!

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

0 posted 2002-11-04 08:42 PM

Go!
Be free.
But,
don't
take my
weeping spirit
with you,
for,
unlike you,
I allow myself
to feel,
and,
unlike you,
I will need
to cry!

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-11-04 08:46 PM

Beautifully penned and much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

2 posted 2002-11-04 08:47 PM

This is lovely. Enjoyed the soft read of this.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-11-04 08:56 PM

A wisp of wistfulness....

~ Let the falling tears cleanse you of all despair

Linda

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-11-04 10:40 PM

Pat, I like the form you wrote this in.
It's very good. Thanks for sharing.

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-11-04 11:01 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Patricia, I just love how you formed this like a streaming teardrop all short and succinct and suppressed with your feelings, sweet friend, this is excellent, my heart goes out to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

6 posted 2002-11-05 01:44 PM

Thanks to all who responded. It reminds me of someone I know who is going through a difficult separation.

Glad you liked it.....

Warm Regards,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

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