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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2002-11-04 07:17 PM

A sand lined cauldron boiled in blue
The fury of the restless few
Of well, adorned in harvest ball
Recede at whim nor sad befall

Ancient oak or tidal grass
Colored cloak sienna brass
Polished high to glee felt free
A sand lined cauldron gingerly

Upon the dunes of staircased sands
Of hawk shown soon as warbler lands
To top the trees in colored walls
A sand lined cauldron boils and calls

Copyright Kkh 11/3/02

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (11-04-2002 07:19 PM).]

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

1 posted 2002-11-04 07:20 PM

It was chilling, I loved it!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2002-11-04 07:20 PM

Impeccable rhythm and vivid imagery made this a pleasure to peruse!

EA

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-11-04 08:05 PM

Thats a really good poem...

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-11-04 08:25 PM

Does this poem require a broom and black pointed hat?

Nicely done, spinning the silk, waiting
for the next poor sap to come into your
midst.....oh yeah!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-11-04 08:32 PM

Very very nicely done Kathleen
Beautiful rhythm and rhyme.
Much enjoyed the read.
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

6 posted 2002-11-04 08:57 PM

I enjoyed this a great deal. Like the others, I thought the rhythm and rhyme seemed perfect. It reads so smoothly.

Warm Regards,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-11-04 10:12 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I just love the beautiful imagery and description of this abode, sweet friend, your words bring about the baroque in us all, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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