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My Mommy Muys can't dance for a while, she'll be in hospital
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My Mommy Muys can't dance for a while, she'll be in hospital |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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 Muys = Muis = Mouse, one of my father's drawings for her My Mommy Muys will be in hospital For the next couple of days at least So if you thought of planning a party She won't be able to dance on your feast Her toes are growing in not the right way And when the doctor had looked, he said: "Dear old lady, we're going to fix them, I'll sign you in and put you in bed" They'll tear and crack her toes a bit Until they'll stand in a straight line And Toerag will be green with envy Because each toe will have a rag real fine Next Thursday morning's dawn I'll bring her To this hospital in Knokke city Belgium hospitals are like fancy hotels You get a beer at dinner and rooms look pretty You haven't seen her in a while Because she drove her car to my sis She's back now, preparing this operation I'm sure it's all of you she will miss I know she'd love to show your replies To all nurses and doc's in this hospital And I'll keep you posted on how she's doing Until she can dance again on your ball Like scattered leaves...my words will flow [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (11-04-2002 07:26 PM).] |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Good luck to her (unless she is fictionus) |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hello Wind, My Mommy Muys is far from fictitious  , she's even a member here at PIP, she writes, I translate and there she is.She's well known here, but hasn't been on for a while because of this trip she made. My Mommy Muys is 91 years old and started computering last year. No, she's not fictitious at all, she's really quite a lady I must say. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (11-04-2002 07:54 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think I shall begin a poem of a lady in a shawl with the idea that her toes shall stick out and that she'll speak with a country drawl... I think I shall make the poem a bit of giggle-er... so that when you read it to Muys, perhaps it will jiggle her... Tell Mum Muys to please take care and listen to her doctors, all so that she can hurry back and tell poems while wearing her shawl! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
She always ended up on the left When she really wanted to go right And when she tried to tiptoe She knew something was not right After a few Dutch-brewed beers This mouse could really jive And though her toes ran askew She had them all, two times five A little snip and a crack Was what the doctored said And so sweet Titia went off To tuck her Mama in bed It won’t be long before she’s up With a smile and a glint in her eye Can you believe this Mama Muys Is only 91 years spry? ** Get well Mama Muys!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Titia I wish you mom the very best in toedom. Be sure to keep us posted. |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
I really enjoyed that poem you wrote, and hope to see more of your poems.. Keep up the good work! I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) Oh Titia, my heart goes out to your mom, sweet friend, we all send angel hugs her way and hope to see a quick recovery from her and that she'll be up and dancing again real soon! (sigh) I send angel hugs of comfort and prayers to you too, sweet friend, God Bless You, you both are angels, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Gee, you would thank after 91 years her toes would know which way to grow!!! Give her my best, Titia, and we will be here waiting until she can put her best foot forward... Don't tell Toe about the free beer in the hospitals there. He will become the biggest hypochondriac the world has ever seen!!  Big knuffels to you, Muys!  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Titia, I see where you got your artistic eye from--your Dad! Wonderful watercolor! Your poem will undoubtedly please your Mommy Muys--and she couldn't help but enjoy the replies this has received!--- Well-wishes, humor, poetry, painting... May I add to the well-wishers and say that I wish her well! tehe ~ sending healing green light and loving pink light to you both (how's your knee?) Earth Angel |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 Boy I sure hope the doctor is a cutie patootie, at her age she should demand the best you know.And I am with Balladeer, you would think 91 year old toes would sure know where they were going wouldn't you? LOL |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Titia, her toes is froze they grows in rows now it shows that all PIPS knows her toes is froze to grow in rows. Send her my Knuffles and tell her to send me the beer Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Titia, I hope all goes well for your Mom..and that her recovery is very quick so she will be back here with her lovely thoughts to share. hugs to you both Maureen |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bill's got a tune for Muys To keep her on her toes ... He can sing and play it So that she will know She can still up and boogey When the beat gets to her feet So come on back to Florida ... Bring that Mum so dear We'll throw a ball in her honor Then stand around and cheer As Muys does the shag Out by the Villa pool ... She'll lead the gathered poets And be nobody's fool ! And when the neighbors Begin to call the cops ... We'll just invite them over ... To dance until they drop ! Get up and boogey Muys We think you are soooooo neat What's a little 'toe' clip When you've got two left feet ! (or is that two feet left ?) If I can be as spry as she At the age of 91 ... Just think of how I'll boogey Because SHE showed me soooooo much FUN ! Okay, dearest friend ... Muys ... you tell those doctors that you've got 'angels' all around the globe watching out for you !  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Titia, has Mum been laughing at the antics because the poets are posting something frantic just tell her "quick, get back on your toes!" for we wish her well, as everyone knows! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Titia, I will be thinking about your mom and you. Hope your mom recovers quickly. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Our beautiful little Titia girl, with all her pictures and poems She had to have her knee surgery, and now it's her sweet little Mums I hope your knee is better now, 'cause strength you'll be needing much more When Mums gets her toes fixed, you'll need strength to keep her from the dance floor So tell Mums just to rest awhile after she has the surgery And she can write a bunch of her good poems for all of us here to see Good luck and best wishes to both of you. With Love And Hugs Ethel |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
LOL, thanks Pippers, she will enjoy this tremendously I'll print it and give it to her on Thursday when I bring her to the hospital. You're all so sweet. He he, I don't think she has seen this thread yet. See, Mommy Muys, all your friends are joining you there in the hospital.  Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Mommy Muys, I'm sending an angel friend to be with you and your doctor and she will be sure those toes get pointed in the right direction. You take good care and get better real soon. Sending you a big hug for a speedy recovery. Love to you, Marti  Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm so sorry to hear that Muys is in the hospital... but if she's surrounded by Toerags, I'm on my way... reserve a room for me! LOL Toerags and beer??? What gal could ask for more, regardless of her age? *G* Muys, dear lady... I hope your recovery is a rapid one!!! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
a beer at the hospital.....sounds good to me  really, I hope your mom is back to dancing very soon...give her my best, please [This message has been edited by SEA (11-06-2002 05:13 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hope those Doctors and Nurses take good care of her...James |
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TradingSpaces19 Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 134Arvada, Colorado |
This is a great poem thank you for sharing it with everyone. I hope your mommy gets better soon so she can dance again. Email me if you want. TradingSpaces19@excite.com thanks again for sharing. Andrea |
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