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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2002-11-04 06:59 PM



~*~

Warming words of love
--Sweet passions in poetry
That sate soul with song

~*~



© Copyright 2002 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-04 07:14 PM


Musical and very true
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2002-11-04 07:18 PM


Wind ~

Many of the love poems written by the poets here at Passions, are of an incredibly high calibre and I was moved to write this senryu of appreciation. Thank you for your comments.

EA

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3 posted 2002-11-04 07:34 PM


Good job... But, its a little to short..

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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4 posted 2002-11-04 07:42 PM



Well, Linda, you did it ~perfectly~, and this is a wonderful tribute to those who write incredibly, fantastic love poems; the ones that just melt your heart, not to mention the rhythm and rhyming and depth of content and imagination.... You did good!

Hugs,
and Warm Regards,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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5 posted 2002-11-04 07:52 PM



Passions poets write
Longing words of tender love~
Inspiration nears.

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2002-11-04 08:02 PM


Hi, Connel! Thank you for the "good job" comment.

I don't know if you are familiar with senryus or not, but they are a form of Japanese short poems that convey a lot with an economy of words. They are of three lines and they have a specific number of syllables on each line. 5-7-5

Haikus have the same format but they are strictly on nature.

Thanks for dropping by and I look forward to reading your work!

Earth Angel


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7 posted 2002-11-04 08:10 PM


Pat ~

Thank you dear poet friend! I appreciate your comments and all you wonderful poets out there in PipLand---I'm just a great big "A" for appreciator of all of you! tehe

P.S. There may be some in this world who may think "A" stands for something else that ends with a couple of esses! haha

~ happy hugs!

Linda

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8 posted 2002-11-04 08:11 PM


Enchantress ~

You just proved my point! Thank you dear poetess!

EA

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9 posted 2002-11-04 08:58 PM


Pleasure of poets
to inscribe on blue of page
verse of life and love.

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2002-11-04 09:16 PM


RoseWhite  ~

Thank you for validating my words by writing such a prime example of that which I was referring! hehe

The proof is in the pudding dear poetess of pleasure!

EA


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11 posted 2002-11-04 09:39 PM


Cavalier gold knights
Lovely queens all in a row
Make up Passions court



(kiss on cheek) Yay!!! Oh my gosh, I just love Passions so much, you and everyone are the best friends a boy can ever have as you mean so much to me, yay! (smiles) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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12 posted 2002-11-04 09:45 PM


Noah ~

You must post that phenomenal senryu! Everybody will adore it! You are so ding dang talented!

~ queenly hugs for you, dear Prince of the Pip people!

Linda

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13 posted 2002-11-04 10:37 PM


So much truth makes it hard to swallow tea. {Passions)like Willie Nelson may sing "You were always on my mind". Thank you.

etoodog

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14 posted 2002-11-04 10:46 PM


Inspiration is
Given by Passions poets
To all with a loving heart

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel
                  

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15 posted 2002-11-04 10:46 PM


Robert ~

Perhaps...

Just a spoon full of sugar
Will make your tea go down
In the most delightful way

Thank you for reading and replying!

Earth Angel

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16 posted 2002-11-04 10:53 PM


...*S*... J

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17 posted 2002-11-04 10:54 PM


Ethel~

Well lookie here! Terrific senryuic reply!
Aren't you spreading your glorious poetic wings! hehe

~ happy hugs

Linda

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18 posted 2002-11-04 10:56 PM


Stubby ~  smilie face

Thank you for reading and for the *S*!

EA

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19 posted 2002-11-05 05:28 PM


Linda, you do these very well.
Earth Angel
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20 posted 2002-11-05 05:35 PM


Sue ~

I'll keep writing them because of readers, such as yourself, who seem to enjoy them!

~ Hope you're feeling better and on the mend from your fall!

Linda

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21 posted 2002-11-06 12:20 PM



How be it you know
Poetry in passion's sweet?
Sing its lilt again

Earth Angel
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22 posted 2002-11-06 12:29 PM


Sunshine ~

You do delight me with your poetic replies!
Thank you dear orb of light! tehe

~ and may all your light be reflected back to you!

EA

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