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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-11-04 02:26 PM



Mood Writings

I try to hold out, not write of the dark
the moods intense, that show their face.
I'd drink the wine to end the feel
to fill the heart and change the pace.

The rhythms pound, the hyper acts
that wrack my body when peace disconnects,
leaving me idled, avoiding the truth
baseless in movements with thoughts I collect

that take away moments, long overdue
blinding my sunset, and dreams powered by
the confidence, shelved once again, shattered thoughts
the twist and the turns of my moods, words imply.

Filled with the sighs that my body proclaims
a switch hitter coming from left, sometimes right.
I try to hold out, not write of the dark
wanting to shed temporary, this night.

A little bit bruised, I can brush off the pain
the perception of me fooling any and all.
As the weariness grows, all that's left is the me
in a mood that is swinging on words of recall.

Sleeping inside me, the part that is hope,
answers my heart when the storming is nil.
What can I do when the mood starts its swing
a shell of myself, laying down my words still...


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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of Depression
1 posted 2002-11-04 02:30 PM


Enjoyed this
And may you continue to be
“laying down my words”

Gloom

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2 posted 2002-11-04 04:55 PM


WynterLady~
I REALLY like the whole of this -

'Filled with the sighs that my body proclaims
a switch hitter coming from left, sometimes right'


Absolutely AWESOME originality~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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