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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-11-04 10:48 AM


Dueting


as always your words stir me
to a place of shadowing
dueting to sounds felt
known to the chosen few
who can by nature
love to the deepest depths
and who pain to a higher degree
so guarded and unguarded
are these emotions we have
that we run to happiness
just to shield ourselves
from ourselves
lest we be reminded
by the biting breath
of frigid wind upon skin
as we walk naked and unashamed
that our feelings still give us away
as beacons of flashing light
to others that do not understand them




I’m not disappointed,  I never expected anything from you.

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (11-04-2002 07:03 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-11-04 11:14 AM


Wow, Helen, this is really a wonderful look at the duality of love. Your poems always have such a soft graceful flow.
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2 posted 2002-11-04 06:37 PM


OneSlickLady~

S T U N N I N G  !

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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3 posted 2002-11-04 10:05 PM




(sigh) Oh my gosh, I just love this, sweet friend, this is gorgeous and scintillates with the beauty of your heart! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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