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0 posted 2002-11-04 09:33 AM



Hah!
You thought you could get away with it,
and I would be the one mom blamed!
Well, I fixed your little red wagon,
and now we will both do double the chores
and have double the restrictions!
But isn't it nice
we have twice
as much fun
when we are
on the run
and trying to hide
from her???
Mirrors are so
much fun!

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-04 09:49 AM


Kacy, this is delightful. So good. Like I said after
your reply to me, I love this. Isn't it fun to
see everyone's different ideas about this theme....
and how all the different "faces" start peeking
out at us???

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel
                  

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2 posted 2002-11-04 09:57 AM


Thanks for your comment. Yes, it is an interesting challenge. One side of me wanted to do a political spoof, one side wanted romance, but the third side won!
?????????????????
Geez, I needed a three faced challenge!

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3 posted 2002-11-04 10:00 AM





ummmm ... Kacy? ... ya know what they say bout people who talk to them selves in mirrors???

     
   *teehee*  

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4 posted 2002-11-04 10:11 AM


No, JM, I never heard, or never listened. What do they say? I know, I know, I have a tweaked brain.
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5 posted 2002-11-04 01:44 PM


I not only loved this poem, I loved your reply to Ethel! You're a hoot and a half girl! LOL

Well, perhaps three faces would be better than two--as they say, "The more the merrier!"

Yep, you were definitely up for the "Two Faces" challenge---and more! haha

EA

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6 posted 2002-11-04 01:49 PM


Cute write Kacy!!
I would say challenge well met.
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

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7 posted 2002-11-04 01:58 PM


EA and Nancy, thanks for sharing in the fun.
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8 posted 2002-11-04 02:57 PM




(giggles in delight) Yep, and especailly in a carnival it will always seem far more than double the fun too in all shapes and sizes! (smiles) I love this, sweet friend, this is so cute and playful, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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9 posted 2002-11-04 03:01 PM


LOL, carnival fun? Yes, why not?
A poetic house of mirrors?

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