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Twist of Fate
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Twist of Fate |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States 
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Twist of Fate A cruel twist of fate was dealt As pain in your chest was felt A life so young, so much would have been left undone Your heart it seems wanted to be a smoking gun A friendship we share through many a tear So happy to know you'll be there many more years A true friend to you and yours I'll always be It's easy you see, when we're family. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Dawn, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it! (big hugggsssss) You speak of family so well here, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dawn, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dawn, this is a beautiful poem, with so much meaning. Thanks for sharing it with us. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Noah and Ethel, Thank you both for your sweet replies. This was written for a few friends, but never shared with them. I recently found it again after a bit. Dawn [This message has been edited by DawnG (11-04-2002 12:59 PM).] |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Dawn, As I know all too well your friends are always as close to your heart as is your family, they are one in the same for you. I am also glad that you will still have time to enjoy smiles and laughter with this person you write about here in this poem. Thanks for sharing your talent here with us.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very lovely and heartfelt piece Dawn. ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dawn, I am so happy that your friend was not lost to you. You have such a sweet and tender way of expressing your feelings of friendship. This was a lovely poem to read. ~ May all your friends and family remain in your cirle of love Earth Angel |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Dawn, you're such a beautiful soul and dear friend. I am deeply touched by your poem and consider it a great honour I may call you friend. Thank you sweet Lady. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sometimes friends feel like family and sometimes members of our family are truly friends. Heartfelt and well said, Dawn! The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Lost Dreamer, Yes, most often my friends and family are one and the same. Thank you for giving me the courage to show this poem to one of its intended receipients, and I hope soon I'll find the courage to show it to the other. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Enchantress, Thank you for your kind words. Yes this poem definately came from my heart, a heart that will never let me forget how very special my friends and family are to me. Dawn |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Earth Angel, I too am thankful that my friends were not lost to me. I may not see them every day, but they are safely tucked within my heart every min of every day as is everyone here at Passions. Dawn |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Munda, A reply to you is probably harder than the reply to Ria's comments. Your reply made me cry and I'm very blessed to have you in my life. Dawn |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Auguste, Thank you very much for your heartfelt words. Yes the lines between family and friends have become very dim as of late, but you know what, I wouldn't have it any other way. Dawn |
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