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Give Me Hope
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Give Me Hope |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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Give me hope When hope is needed Because we all have those days We really need that Give me hope When I am down And I can't get up Without the help of a friend Give me hope When I am sick And I am dying So I can live on In happiness Give me hope When love seems lost And I think I will never find anybody again To love in my life Give me hope Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
I know the feeling.  What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I too know this feeling, so I'm hoping that my prayers for hope reach you. Dawn |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
How true it is that we need one another. Ecclesiastes 4 9 Two are better than one, because they have a good return for their work: 10 If one falls down, his friend can help him up. But pity the man who falls and has no one to help him up Enjoyed the poem. God bless! [This message has been edited by Radrook (11-05-2002 05:42 AM).] |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Soooo nice words,,,I love that very much,, Nice thoughts.. Hugesss Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
the_loner_23 Enjoyed the write. It brings to mind the old adage, give and you shall recieve. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Unfortunately, hope is not something that can be given. It is within us, if we'll only look deeply enough. Enjoyed! The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Julie, yes, hope exists within you, so find that and clutch it and let all of us encourage you to hang onto it as every coming day approaches! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Julie, Came back to reread this cause I really need hope tonight. These lines really apply right now: " Give me hope When love seems lost And I think I will never find anybody again To love in my life" Dawn |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Julie, there is always hope. The spark of hope may get mighty dim at times, but there has to be at least a tiny flicker of hope. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
The poem is written well and I liked the ending.I felt better knowing there are prayers for hope and loneliness to be overcome. etoodog |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic...I give you hope...James |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Here is some more Hope we don't get enough enjoyed reading Bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
In the reaching there is hope...you have given it to all of us...and received it ten fold. Excellent foundations here Julie. ThisDiamond |
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