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Orchards of Quiet Moon

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sigheyes
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the winds of destiny


25 posted 11-09-2002 10:00 AM       View Profile for sigheyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sigheyes

I am so glad that this came back to the top.  I think it is lovely.
dougsbird21
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26 posted 11-09-2002 10:06 AM       View Profile for dougsbird21   Email dougsbird21   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit dougsbird21's Home Page   View IP for dougsbird21

Keep up the good work with structure..poems written in plain lines without spaces,lack of weird punctuation and odd capitalizations are boring.....step over the line and you'll succeed!

"Write what you feel, not what u think you should feel."

JAR
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27 posted 11-24-2002 11:33 PM       View Profile for JAR   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JAR

LittlL''

how dreams arrive
J'

Salty
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28 posted 11-25-2002 12:28 PM       View Profile for Salty   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Salty

I came looking for you, and I'm sure glad I did.  After seeing your post on my writing I wanted to see your work again. It's been awhile since I've read you, and I must say you have such a great talent for this.

A most unique visual appears with your every word.  "Excellent"


Salty
BloomingRose
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29 posted 11-25-2002 07:33 PM       View Profile for BloomingRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BloomingRose

I fell for hours
    splashing into stars
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

There is so much beauty in this poem I hardly know which line is best.
It's all so very beautiful, in words and imagery.

Deb


JamesMichael
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30 posted 11-26-2002 01:33 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Beautifully written...James
Sudhir Iyer
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31 posted 11-26-2002 06:50 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Like Janet said, I wished this went on forever....

wonderfully captivating writing... muchly enjoyed...

regards,
sudhir
EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...


32 posted 11-27-2002 08:25 PM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

I have been blessed to read much fine poetry today, and this is certainly amongst those offerings!

I don't know where I'm running now, I'm just running on ~ Jackson Browne

Daniel J D
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33 posted 11-27-2002 09:06 PM       View Profile for Daniel J D   Email Daniel J D   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Daniel J D

I am moonstruck and in awe.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Miah
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34 posted 11-27-2002 10:20 PM       View Profile for Miah   Email Miah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Miah

Brava!! this was absolutly beautiful!!
vandana
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35 posted 11-28-2002 09:50 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

enjoy your read
Wind
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36 posted 11-28-2002 09:54 AM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

I loved that lauren. The images were amaizing, I didn't want it to end.

Never be normal!

ctowen
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37 posted 11-28-2002 11:28 AM       View Profile for ctowen   Email ctowen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ctowen's Home Page   View IP for ctowen

I have lost track of the countless reads upon these words ....
as many as the stars I have dreamt of waking to ...
such bright smiles, warm and loving thoughts fill your painted stars.
Sometimes we forget to simply smell the flowers but worse, stand back and see the garden.
I am captured under your green thumb, greeneyes.  
Janet Marie
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38 posted 11-28-2002 02:01 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Miss you butterfly sister of mine  
Happy Thanksgiving girlie
I bet this one is extra special




Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


39 posted 11-28-2002 08:58 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

quote:
I sometimes failed
     to cross the silent
borders of your thoughts
and i've wondered why i like reading you so much... peace 'n hugs lady.
Nightshade
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just out of reach


40 posted 11-28-2002 09:44 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

My goodness Lauren, this is beautiful!! Library bound it is. I always enjoy your writings as they never cease to make me drift off in wonder...        hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

[This message has been edited by Nightshade (11-28-2002 09:45 PM).]

Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind


41 posted 11-29-2002 05:14 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

Wow, I am so touched by the responses.....thank you all so much for taking your time to read, and leave you heart notes.....love to all....HUGSSSSSS and muwwwaaahhhssssssss


Lauren~

Deep inside the stillness
........I can hear you speak
You're still an inspiration
........To me

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42 posted 12-19-2002 01:12 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Sad, still and refreshing.
Janet Marie
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43 posted 10-09-2004 10:54 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

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