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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2002-11-03 02:59 PM


With Heart and Soul


I could have danced all night,
but you weren't there.
So I brushed aside the missing,
and watched you from afar,
escaping to a place
that lifted me off the floor and
into your arms.

I heard the memories of young,
kept time with those yet to come,
with a smile that felled me into
the reflections that filled
the vacant space beside me.

Laughter, music, a little rock and roll,
and I was elevated from Yesterday into Tomorrow,
a world of you, a world with view
and a wait for that kiss of eyes,
to find me there.

You are my unplanned trip,
that I keep pocketed in "almost there"
fulfilling the most basic of needs,
integrating two worlds apart
moving towards one another
to bring about a breath of life
to one who has fallen.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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1 posted 2002-11-03 03:52 PM




(sigh) Oh Maureen, this is so very touching, sweet friend, and may true love always reach out to you with heart and soul and bring you great cheer! (kiss on cheek) This iswonderful, sweet friend, I love it, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-11-03 03:55 PM


Beautifully said M.  much heart within this
write...done as only you can...

Suetang
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3 posted 2002-11-03 04:21 PM


Hello Maureen

I could feel your love and longing through each and every verse but I also felt a little sadness.  I wish for you much love and happiness.

Take care.....Sue


I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

[This message has been edited by Suetang (11-03-2002 04:22 PM).]

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4 posted 2002-11-03 04:45 PM


Maureen, I love the picture of words that
you painted in my thoughts. This is beautiful.
Thanks for sharing.

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel
                  

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5 posted 2002-11-03 05:12 PM


Stunning Maureen!
I absolutely love this piece..
into my library it goes!
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

jwesley
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6 posted 2002-11-03 05:24 PM


Ah my friend, such words from envoke deep feelings from such as I...loved it...

jwesley

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2002-11-03 06:05 PM


Thank you all...this may seem sad..but I was at a family gathering in Philadelphia last night with Dinner and Dancing...and I had no partner to dance with..so into my mind I went, to let my thoughts lead.

*s

Not sad at all..just reminiscing about past, present and future joys.

~smiling~
M

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8 posted 2002-11-03 06:25 PM



I'd like to be able to wave a magic wand and deliver the perfect man to bring joy to your life--and your bed!!!---while I'm at it, I could send one to myself as well! Maybe the universe will give us 2 for the price of one!

EA

nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2002-11-03 06:30 PM


haaaaaaa  there is no such thing as a perfect man...but  you did bring me a smile EA...
thank you
hugs
M

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10 posted 2002-11-03 10:07 PM


EA and M

Raising my hand...opps.... no man is  perfect, not me anyways..

but any how,,, enjoyed the read M, i can agree with you.

Bernie


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

nakdthoughts
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11 posted 2002-11-04 10:30 AM


Thanks for stopping by Bernie
M

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