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Denea Furr Junior Member
since 2002-11-03
Posts 31Indiana |
Look up at the stars, they shine so brightly The stars in the sky are bunched together so tightly I think the stars are the most beautiful sight Alone I sit here gazing at them tonight I don't need anyone with me to look at these magnificent things All I need is myself to think the thoughts that they bring Ursa Major, Ursa Minor in the night Big Dipper, Little Dipper, what a sight Amazing are these stars shining in the sky If I could only tell the world just what I feel I'd tell them to look up at night and see whats real The stars are so gorgeous in that sky so far away The wierd thing is they will look like tomorrows and still like yesterdays Constellations, Astriums, in the night Pices, Scorpio, Cancer, Libra, what a sight |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Delightful poem!!! Sometimes, we forget God's gifts are right before our eyes. ***Ivy Rose |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Denea, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I too wonder the same thing, how they are the same stars Ptolemy, Galileo, Copernicus, all saw with the same pair of eyes and how their beauty remains unchanged! (sigh) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Denea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hello, Denea! You're a star gazer too, I see! I often feel that by looking up at the firmament things are put into proper perspective for me down here on terra firma. I enjoyed reading your poem! Earth Angel |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
denea...welcome to the first steps of your journey to the pages blue...i see you have gotten a good start and your words flow like water...the dropplets become you and i am pleased to see you here...welcome again...helen |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to another star gazer. I enjoyed the sky watch. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Denea, thanks for sharing your well-written poem. It was very descriptive of what you saw in the beautiful sky. You painted a pretty picture. I love the stars, moon,and sky, too. Thanks, again. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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