3 Sheets to Nowhere - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #23

3 Sheets to Nowhere

~K
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 104

0 posted 2002-11-03 04:01 AM

I swim
to sink into
the frothy maze of

What if...

I let it
pull me
under gently

to caress
my errant
senses

My liquid
lucid dream...

I wander oceans
to drown out
your absense

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

1 posted 2002-11-03 04:05 AM

*drowning within lucid dreams now* hrmm..no not really but loved your poem.. I'm sorry lol I should be in bed by now but do I ever listen to myself no!!

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

2 posted 2002-11-03 06:49 AM

ahhhh nice write about a bad habit.
be nice to you!
aloha, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-11-03 09:34 AM

"K"....
Good poem with lots written between the lines.
(hope you feel better this morning??
I really do hope so!!)

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-11-03 02:14 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh K, I could sense sadness in-between the lines, sweet friend, I hope everything is alright and may those "what if's" be replaced with "it cans"! (sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much!You have such a beautiful heart, sweet K, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2002-11-03 03:18 PM

I know this feeling, only I don't swim so well (that's why I married a lifeguard at the time *s)

M

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2002-11-03 04:10 PM

Ah, yes, the "What if..." scenario! Been there--and now trying not to do that!

Great little poem!

EA

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.