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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2002-11-02 11:58 PM



In moist ribbons of
White serenade
Falling stars
Ramble

Copyright Kkh 11/2/02

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
SimplyGold
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1 posted 2002-11-03 12:01 PM


Lovely and perfect for the moment..

SG

Madame Chipmunk
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2 posted 2002-11-03 12:12 PM


Simply beautiful, Kathy...
A couple of weeks ago, David and I were driving back from Ann Arbor, and we saw a falling star... it was the first one I had ever seen
~ hugs from Kzoo

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-11-03 12:29 PM


Beautiful....just perfect!
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2002-11-03 12:48 PM


Even visually it gives the impression of something falling down and getting smaller.

A little gem.

EA


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5 posted 2002-11-03 12:49 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love the heavenly feel of this, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl
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6 posted 2002-11-03 01:48 AM


AAAWWW, Kathleen...
someone else who can say so much
in such few words.....

~~With  Love  And  Hugs  To  All~~
                  Ethel

SmartChick
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7 posted 2002-11-03 07:52 AM


Simply beautiful! I like the way you did this.
VAS
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8 posted 2002-11-03 10:58 AM


beautiful painting
of a lovely view
vivid

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Wind
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9 posted 2002-11-03 11:05 AM


A short, sweet melody
Magnus
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10 posted 2002-11-03 12:09 PM


Ramble, rumble,  Jamble, jumble...

5,4,3,2...pretty good concept....like this..

scorpio
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right...there
11 posted 2002-11-03 01:32 PM


succinctly yet expressively penned..

...believe what your heart feels...

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