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Madame Chipmunk
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0 posted 2002-11-02 11:26 PM


*~A Tease~*




You brighten the shadowy forest surround
boughs of yellow and gold
a light turned on at dusk
beaming your dazzle to glow

your breathtaking brilliance catches my eye
illumning my way
changing the scene from darkness to light

oh how I wish you would stay
but your beauty is a tease
a flicker of radiance
ephemeral in phase
a fleeting moment of passion

tomorrow your glitter will carpet the ground
~*~

photo by Lyra Nesius


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1 posted 2002-11-02 11:39 PM


I've always been partial to a bit of teasing m'self!

Beautiful photo Lyra...and yes..Yes...YES...
to the poem!

(see? teasing works for me! *wink*)

stunning work, Madame.

HUGS.

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2 posted 2002-11-02 11:40 PM


Lyra,

This poem is beautiful and so true. I was out early this morning walking in the woods. You captured the picture so well. These are pensive days for me and I have been sending good wishes your way!

SimplyGold

Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-11-02 11:45 PM


Thanks so much, Karen...  I love autumn, but the season is truly a tease...  It never lasts long enough...
Fortunately, the leaves are still here today lighting up the woods behind my house, but as soon as it rains... the trees will be bare and the ground will be yellow.
~ hugs from the chipmunk in the autumn woods

Lyra

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4 posted 2002-11-02 11:46 PM


Impatiently we await the pagent of the autumn gala ball...only to know so well it's fleeting disposition...
Wonderful descript iluminations here Lyra.
I love the photo.
Hugs, ThisDiamond

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-11-02 11:48 PM


Thanks so much, Electra...
This is a picture of my backyard, taken from my livingroom deck the other day...
I am so happy that the beauty of autumn has chosen to stay a bit longer this year because I may never see this again...
thanks also for your good wishes.
~ loving chipmunk hugs and blessings to you

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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6 posted 2002-11-02 11:49 PM


Thanks so much, Kathy...
I can never get enough of this season...
I think I could live with it all year and never get tired of it
~ many loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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7 posted 2002-11-03 12:31 PM




(sigh) Awwwwwwww, I know just how you feel, sweet friend, the spring is my favorite season and autumn my second but the beauty is always so short-lived and that is why it is important to always embrace each new day! (sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2002-11-03 12:41 PM


Lyra, now you're the one doing the teasing!
I enjoyed reading this so much that I wanted it to go on longer! This was just a teaser!

Seriously speaking, I REALLY think this was superbly written (and great photo to boot!)and I'm giving it a comfy berth in my biblioteque!

~ angel hugs and unicorn magic

P.S. Don't forget the secret I shared with you in my Unicorn reply....

Earth Angel

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9 posted 2002-11-03 12:41 PM


Thanks so much, Noah...
Oh how I wish those pretty leaves would stay all year
~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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10 posted 2002-11-03 12:43 PM


Thanks Linda... for your very kind and complimentary words...
and thanks also for reminding me about the secret of the unicorn...
I will do it right now...
~ hugs from a chipmunk in autumn

Lyra

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11 posted 2002-11-03 01:05 AM


What a gorgeous poem to compliment the picture.  Breathtaking they are.

   To everyday there is a season and some never last long enough.  (ain't it the truth though)  

prayers and hugs to you Lyra.

Madame Chipmunk
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12 posted 2002-11-03 01:15 AM


Thanks so much for your reply, Lori...
I haven't seen you in a while...
I hope all is well
~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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13 posted 2002-11-03 01:40 AM


Lyra, our sweet lady chippymunk, this is
so beautiful. Autumn is my favorite time of
year, too. But, like you said, all these
beautiful colors (like in your picture) only
last for a little while.
I'm making your beautiful picture and poem
last, though....into my library you're
going.
Lyra, I love the way you see the beauty of
things and can write so perfectly about
them that you make all of us see the beauty,
too. Thank you, sweet Lady.
With Love And Hugs,
Ethel

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14 posted 2002-11-03 01:41 AM


Whoops-si-daisy....
I forgot to click my library
There I go!!

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15 posted 2002-11-03 04:07 AM


Mother Nature is such a tease..well obviously because she's a woman right Lovely picture reminds me of when I was younger and visiting my grandmother in pa..thank for sharing Madame Chipmunk

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (11-03-2002 04:08 AM).]

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16 posted 2002-11-03 07:13 AM


Yes, indeed it does brighten up the forest. This is beautiful. And, I love the picture.
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17 posted 2002-11-03 08:23 AM


the double-entendre' of this was not lost on me, Madam MunkSter.  In a way, its a pity that beauty cannot stay external forever.  It's our job to find that beauty within and never fix upon which we only see.
Jeff

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18 posted 2002-11-03 08:39 AM



Ah, but this year, it's a slow tease... ...enjoyed the beauty of this, Lyra...thank you!

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19 posted 2002-11-03 10:32 AM


What a lovely tease. So slow and long lasting this year. But momentarily that light will be on the ground and we will be working hard to rake it and bag it into darkness!

If the light would only stay till Spring and then turn luscous green again.

Hugs this brilliant day, Marti

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20 posted 2002-11-03 04:58 PM


Yes,  a fleeting glimpse at the beauty of
Fall colors....to become nothing more than
a rake's fodder...

Nice one ChipperMunch...like it...beautiful
pic too!!!

Madame Chipmunk
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21 posted 2002-11-03 05:06 PM


Thanks so much, Ethel...
I wonder if I could invent a way to make it last all year
~ autumnal hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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22 posted 2002-11-03 05:18 PM


Thanks so much, Ceinwyn...
I couldn't resist taking that picture,  I went out onto the deck barefoot to get it
Mother Nature is.... quite a tease!
But at least this year she has extended autumn for us
~ barefoot hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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23 posted 2002-11-03 05:19 PM


Thanks so much, Sue...
Those yellow leaves look like someone has literally turned the light on in the dark forest...
~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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24 posted 2002-11-03 05:21 PM


There is a triple entendre there also, Jeff...
As we age, and go through the different stages of our lives,  we have to let go of one, in order to reach the next...
thanks so much for your thoughtful reply
~ loving Munkster hugs

Lyra

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25 posted 2002-11-03 05:23 PM


Thanks so much, Karilea.... I am thankful for the slowness this year...
I may see autumn next year, but I can't count on it
~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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26 posted 2002-11-03 05:25 PM


Thanks so much, Marti...
When the trees are so brightly colored, even the dark days look bright
~ bright hugs on a dark day

Lyra

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27 posted 2002-11-03 05:26 PM


Thank you so much, Barry for your poetic words on leaf raking
~ autumn chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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28 posted 2002-11-03 09:37 PM


Lyra

Just think how fun the children have tromping into piles of leaves...the crunch makes so many smiles...yet, it is so beautiful in its turn of color while still on tree.  Enjoyed your photo and poem greatly!  

Madame Chipmunk
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29 posted 2002-11-13 12:10 PM


Thanks so much, Martie...  Those are just a few of the things I love about autumn...
We just returned tonight, from a trip to the south and had a second dose of autumn... just in case I never get to see it again
~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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30 posted 2002-11-13 01:24 AM


Lyra,
How in the world did I miss this? Lovely words so beautifully illustrated.

=============
tomorrow your glitter will carpet the ground
=============
Cool line.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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31 posted 2002-11-13 10:44 AM


No one else can tease and please the way you do, Lyra.
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32 posted 2002-11-13 11:04 AM


Beatiful poem.. Thank you so much for sharing.. I really enjoyed the read.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

Madame Chipmunk
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33 posted 2002-11-13 11:26 AM


Thanks so much Kacy... now if I could only tease this rediculous disease out of my system... things would be wonderful
~ chipmunk teasing hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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34 posted 2002-11-13 11:28 AM


Thanks so much for your reply, Connel
Welcome to Passions... you will love it here.
I look forward to reading some of your work
~ welcoming chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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35 posted 2002-11-16 01:40 AM


Lovely Madame...James
Madame Chipmunk
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36 posted 2002-11-16 12:28 PM


Thanks so much, James...
~ hugs and grins

Lyra

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