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When You Are Gone
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When You Are Gone |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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When You Are Gone Written for J When you are gone as gone you shall be I will still have your love to comfort me I’ll hear the music of your love’s song It will play within my soul ever on Your smile I’ll see when I close my eyes And I’ll taste your kiss in each sunrise When you leave me as I know you will I’ll have your love until time stands still When you are gone to that better place My heart shall still feel your echoes trace I’ll know you are held in my memory And that together in spirit we will be Your soul still enriching me with this The sweetest touch of your last kiss When you go I’ll have a part of you In all that I say think and do When you are gone on ahead of me My soul will still know your ministry I’ll always have the knowledge of this A love that clothed me in true bliss The touch of your spirit will guide me To the place where love waits patiently When you depart a part will still remain Your soul’s touch will keep me free from pain Although you’re gone you’ll be with me Your spirit will stay throughout eternity Marsha Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is such a sweet poem Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
ain't no way, no how, i am gonna let dis jewel escape thru the cracks onto the 'missing pages' of Passion. *s* It is true, is it not, that a true love, even if it cannot be, never totally vanishes. It has changed us, and therefore stays within us, in parts, forever. Jeff |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Marsha, this is so beautiful. I hope the one who inspired it has seen it. Thanks for sharing your feelings with us. ~~With Love And Hugs To All~~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhSweetMarshaLove~ 'I’ll always have the knowledge of this A love that clothed me in true bliss' I sooooooooooooo understand~ Love you and you 'know' my heart hears your sighs~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is such a beautifully bittersweet poem, sweet friend, yes, know that love will always be with you and it will never fail as its beauty is infinite! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am so glad you posted this poem..so lovely, Marsha and I know it is what is in your heart...the loving you possess...and share hugssss M |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
From me to you - a kiss of understanding, a hug of hope and a promise of a listening ear...Sarah, if you should need us. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marsha Beautiful words of love and devotion from the kindest of souls. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
From the moment I saw the title, I knew this was going to touch me deeply... but what I didn't anticipate is that my reading would be delayed until this week that contains one of those anniversaries that only time and memories help us through. *S* Your words leave no doubt that your memories are rich... and that lack of more time is the only regret. When you leave me as I know you will I’ll have your love until time stands still Yes... you will... and nothing can take that away. *S* Big hearthugs. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Marsha I am glad I went hunting for treasures this morning as this is a  and needs put back to the top for all to see. Very well done gal! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 ...sigh....  |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Me thinks this one is special! |
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