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Second Chances. |
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SeanD Junior Member
since 2002-11-02
Posts 12 |
Play it backwards my friend, That was just too sad of an end. Give him back all that he lost, Stop all the storms that tossed. Maybe you don't really care, But this boys life aint been fair. Better to love and lost than to have never loved, I know a place where I'd like that shoved. Would it be better to have never had it, Than to live your life full of regret? Give him back his dog and home, Somewhere that he can roam. Restore his tools and truck, Can one man have that much bad luck? Bring back his kids and wife, Put an end to his cruel strife. You know a smile the face embraces, Don't you believe in second chances? |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Sean, this is wonderful, sweet friend, and may the second wind always bring you great joy and fortune! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sean, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome poem Cold hands means a warm heart |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Sean, This sounds like a country song played backwards. LOL. No seriously, this is a great write. Thank you for sharing. Dawn |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
If only we could! Enjoyed! God bless! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 oh my...this is so sad...and beautiful |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
I see much wisdom in your walk. Thank you. etoodog |
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