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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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I could fall from the sky ~like a shooting star ~like a spark of warm fire ~like a soft white feather ~like rain I could float away ~like the smoothest of driftwood ~like a wisp of smoke from a candle ~like a red baloon ~like a ghost I could become ~a cactus flower ~a bird in the sky ~the apple at the top of a tree ~a plain grey stone If I wanted to [This message has been edited by Wind (11-02-2002 07:22 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Liz, such breathtaking imagery always fill your words, sweet friend, if I chose to be anything else in the world, I would love to be a sparrow as they always sing such pretty songs and fly with youthful spirit! (sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
yes, whatever you believe, is what you can be! Loved the message of this one, my friend! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yep, yep, yep...and I say do it all, my friend, because in the end all you have is what you did, what you said, the feelings you shared - enjoyed... jwesley |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Liz....... Oh yes, sweet friend, your spirit is as free as the "wind". You really picked a good "user name", Liz. Thanks for sharing with us. You are a delight. ~~With Love And Hugs To All~~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Absolutely. Through poetry, all is possible... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I could float away ~like the smoothest of driftwood ~like a wisp of smoke from a candle ======================== Wonderful imagery and imagination... Well done Poet of the Wind  Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A lovely fantasy daydream, Liz... It sounds like fun to me  ~ hugs from the chipmunk floating through the airLyra |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
wonderfully done. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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