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SeanD
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since 2002-11-02
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0 posted 2002-11-02 06:58 PM


Today I was brought back to reality.
My heart started beating wildly.
The weight on my chest disappeared,
Gone were the doubts I feared.
Your eyes lifted my heavy heart,
Weighed down while we were apart.
That smile brought instant joy,
All resistance to destroy.
But I would never fight,
Don't want you out of my sight.
Holding you in my arms
My shaking body warms.
When our lips touched each other
My body began to recover.
Life flowed back inside.
With revival I sighed.
As I moved to touch you there,
You moved to meet me, fully aware.
Under my caresses you quivered,
Your pent up passion at last delivered.
Your soft, supple, fleshy breasts
My resolve fully tests.
Reunited our bodies heal.
Oh, the renewed passion we feel.
We both needed today's event,
More that all wealth it meant.
Today we conquered defeat,
And are once again complete.

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-11-02 07:00 PM


Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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since 2000-12-17
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Portland, Oregon
2 posted 2002-11-02 07:16 PM




(smiles) Oh Sean, I too just love the feeling that love can climb any mountains and can conquer any gray skies and I wish for this strength to always shine with your love and for the love to only grow stronger each and every day! (sigh) This is a marvelous write, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sean, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2002-11-02 07:37 PM


together...complete...lucky are the ones that are blessed with these gifts!  Loved this one, and much happiness to you...
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