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~K
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0 posted 2002-11-02 06:54 PM



Ravished by the
silk back drop
of imagination
our sighs
mingle forever
lost in this
hesitant kiss

Intrinsic

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-11-02 06:58 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

~K
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2 posted 2002-11-02 07:03 PM


thank you loner! I Always appreciate your kind (abeit brief) responses!!!
Wind
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3 posted 2002-11-02 07:06 PM


a lovely image. I have not yet experienced my first kiss. Hopefull soon.
You are right about Julie. Her responses are breif and heartfelt

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4 posted 2002-11-02 07:07 PM




(sigh) This is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, and believe that the magic of every romantic moment is always so vivid when the imagination like that of a small boy and girl in ones heart is released! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet K, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

~K
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5 posted 2002-11-02 07:19 PM


Wind~

I truly hope your first kiss is the magical moment it should be! If your in love I'm sure it will be!


Noah~

You must be the sweetest guy (besides my husband) that I have EVER met...I always post poems here hoping for a little love from you! So here is some back at you!
            

jwesley
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6 posted 2002-11-02 07:47 PM


and such the barest touch of kiss
from lips of thine
enraptures me,
carries me,
floats me just above
the misty veils...
of Reality.

Beautiful write, my friend, the first I've read, but not the last of yours I'll read.

jwesley



~K
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7 posted 2002-11-02 07:58 PM


jwesley~

I like your poem better than mine! I'll be keeping an eye out for you too!

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