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Quattrocento |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(Here is a re-post in inspiration of Dea-Di-Amore's "Florence" and Karen's reply "Still Remains" to her poem.  )Quattrocento By: Noah Eaton 1/10/02 I’m welcomed to your City of Flowers I’m walking down your alabaster bird-hatching streets I’m polishing the bronze doors to my dreams cathedral Opening them before you, my sweet darling Come, my love, I’ll take you into Ghiberti’s workshop Together we’ll re-establish the grace of Donatello We’ll etch our loves fantasies into statue form Decorate our hearts with the beauty of loves art and soul Ever since you have revealed your love to me Timeless visions have been coming back easily You’ve brought the Renaissance to my heart In loves arms, we’ll relive Quattrocento You’ve renovated all my empty walls into frescoes You have given my dreams perspective My skies are now our fantasies Sistine ceiling Myriads of lovers dreams come true filling each horizon Lay me down in your garden of roses under your mulberry trees I’ll kiss your luscious moist cranberry lips We’ll strum eternities in G-minor Basking in the heavens afterglow we’ll cherish Ever since you have revealed your love to me Timeless visions have been coming back easily You’ve brought the Renaissance to my heart In loves arms, we’ll relive Quattrocento Like Van Eyck, you have braided rainbows in my skies Like Mona Lisa, you always make me sigh Hold me, my love, hold me forever I’ll make you happy every day and night Your love is so divine… Ever since you have revealed your love to me Timeless visions have been coming back easily You’ve brought the Renaissance to my heart In loves arms, we’ll relive Quattrocento Forever and ever and ever… I will always love you… "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-02-2002 05:44 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
As always this is beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hey sidekick! This is very beautiful.. and a wonderful addition to the other two poems. ~Hugs sweetie~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I remember seeing this before Noah...it reads just as sweetly today. Glad to have the opportunity to read again. ThisDiamond |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
A well deserved re-posting, as it screams to the heart to be read and appreciated. Line after line of gossamer wording bound in heaven-sent loving words. You are the Master of this, Noah. Few come close to writing with this much kindliness. Your buddy, working his tail off, Jeff |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Goodness gracious, Noah.... This is ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!!! Thanks so much for reposting it. I would never have seen this work of art if you hadn't, probably. Thanks again, sweet Noah, for sharing with us ~~With Love And Hugs To All~~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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*Stubby* Member
since 2002-09-19
Posts 122 |
Beautiful Thankyou J |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Noah...I feel like Ive been there now... wonderful imagery and vocab in this...you paint us a portait and take us on a tour. have you really been there? You write it as if you have. I loved all the reference to the names of the cities and sights. very cool. jm Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Noah... I believe this is one of your best... Absolutely superb writing with lovely vivid images  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - may your love with Joanna proper and be together soon.. BC |
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