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By The Stars
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By The Stars |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“BY THE STARS” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I sat behind the moon waiting for love words from you, then they came, first one then another, soft, gentle… As I read them I understood you, and I felt your thoughts until I had known every one, and sensing the desires of you brought them inside me, all while sitting behind the moon waiting for them to be delivered by the stars… ~~~~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BillCharles~ Oh ... I LOVE the thought of love-words twinkling like the stars ! BEAUTIFUL~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This poem is incredibly intimate--on a soul level. So alluringly lovely... EA |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
EA captured it well...intimate on a soul level. A very beautiful write. ThisDiamond |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill If you can sit behind the moon and listen with your heart...then you are pretty special...but, I already knew that. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, what a special image you have painted here. Just beautiful. Thanks. ~With Love And Hugs~ Ethel |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Not only do stars bring you words of love, they help you understand yourself. Take it from me. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Bill...With every poem, you just keep getting better and better. This tugged at my heartstrings like no other. There are no words to adequately express the impact of this poem upon the emotions of this reader. ***Ivy Rose |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bill, this piece is full of love and longing. Incedibly beautiful! Mind if I keep this one?  Didn't think you would... ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, and may you always be near the moon and may she deliver stars your way and make the dark side of the moon illuminate! (big hugggsssssss) Yay, this is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Bill, I have been reading you very much. And I must say quite honestly...that you are writing with great depth and feeling. More than you ever have... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
all while sitting behind the moon waiting for them to be delivered by the stars ==================== thats a very cool image and personification. A lovely romantic write of heart with a touch of longing. Well done poet sir. jm Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
And, she will be dancing on every rainbow, Skipping from star to star, Scattering moondust all around, Understanding who ~You~ are! I enjoy your poetry so much. It is so touching and imaginative. Can't wait for the real deal, for your poems, I think, will cause these blue screens to sizzle with a bright tinge of red, steam hissing out from all the ports! You are an excellent poet, making us all smile and feel! Thanking you, Warm Regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
i hear an echo in the night...giggle...helen |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Who needs satellite communications...it's in the stars...great write Bill.... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful Bill! |
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