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Sadness in the darkness....
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Sadness in the darkness.... |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Sadness in the darkness I thought that I would be fine I made up my mind to start again Promising myself to be normal Throw away my sadness and breath in new life Leave my darkest moments Asking my self for a while is there any white heart without a feelings? Can any one simply ignore others feelings after long relationship? Simply your answer is no What about my broken heart? My sadness in the darkness That day that I couldn’t be normal I couldn’t hide my tears I was so sorry to be sad for nothing I was fighting with my self, talking to my shadow But, I couldn’t I am sorry I couldn’t be normal My broken heart was asking for something strange All I needed in that day is the person who opened his heart for me who showed me how the life goes on with new love, and woke up my heart and soul again But, that day I will never and ever forget I was so sorry to be sad for nothing Shading my tears on my face And holding the last memories With my sadness in the darkness Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) [This message has been edited by secretlife (11-02-2002 10:35 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It's OK to be sad. Hopefully you've taken a step away from it just by writing this. Your bio indicated a desire for someone to help in editing. Here are some corrections in (): 'I though(t) that I would be fine. I made up my mind to start again, Promising myself to be normal Throw (away)my sadness and breath(in) new life Leave my dark(est) moments' I enjoyed reading this poem, secretlife. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
In the darkness, sometimes the arms we need are our own...A very deep and wonderful write. ThisDiamond |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Secret Life, you sound like you're coping with this. I hope so. Thanks for sharing yuour heart. Love To All, Ethel |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Thanks so much for ur correction. I corrected dear.. again thanks alot.. Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) I hope everything is alright, sweet friend, this sounds so very sad and I hope your love still touches you in the way like the first time you ever met and keeps encouraging you that he'll be there for you and faithful always! (big hugggsssssss) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Night Shadow Junior Member
since 2002-08-04
Posts 41 |
Sweet Heart No fears no tears when love is there just remm dont be aware Night Shadow |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Thanx alot Night Shadow for ur cute words.. I am so happy to know that u share that with me.... **** * Hugess Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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