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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-11-02 08:26 AM


“TASTE A DREAM”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Last night I held you tight
in my arms, cool breezes of
autumn entered the room and
brushed my face gently with
its chill, yet I felt only
the warmth of you…

Fingers traced with caring
memories, lingering where
they would, not to stay but
to enchant with the delicacy
of endless thoughts…

But I only lie here in reflection,
mesmerized by your passions
not yet known, until I awake
and you lie by my side to
taste a dream...
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
regards2you
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1 posted 2002-11-02 08:59 AM



Bill, if you keep writing poetry as well as this particular poem, you will have a line of us from here to the moon, each famished, just waiting;
even, if only, for one little nibble of "To Taste ~THAT~ Dream"!

Enjoyed this a lot.

Warm Regards,
Pat

  

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Enchantress
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2 posted 2002-11-02 09:01 AM


Oooh Bill....how very romantic!
Much enjoyed...
~Morning Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-11-02 03:24 PM




(sigh) Oh Bill, this is soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I know this feeling ever so much where I lay in my bed and paint the vision of my Joanna lying beside me staring into her gorgeous green eyes! (smiles) I wish this happiness for you forever and ever, sweet friend, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
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4 posted 2002-11-03 12:05 PM


Bill....What a creative and imaginative thought...to taste a dream. What a beautiful and romantic dream goes tender into the night with the writing of this poem. ***Ivy Rose
garysgirl
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5 posted 2002-11-03 02:40 AM


Bill....
Dear friend, I simply
loooooovvvvveeeee  your
kind of dreams. I have these
kinds often of my sweet Gary.
Very good-tasting, I might add !!
(BIGGGGG  smiles)

~~With  Love  And  Hugs  To  All~~
                  Ethel

SmartChick
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6 posted 2002-11-03 07:31 AM


Bill, what a beautiful romantic poem this is.
Kethry
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Victoria Australia
7 posted 2002-11-03 07:38 AM


Bill,
now I ache for the dream found in your words.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



garysgirl
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8 posted 2002-11-03 11:34 AM


Bill, dear friend.......
Hope you didn't mind me getting an idea for
a poem from this fine poetry of yours.

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel
                  

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2002-11-03 01:50 PM


Well, you do have a way of making the ladies line up for your loving attention. Actually, I wouldn't mind a taste of one of your dreams. May I take a number as well?...

This was deliciously delightful..and intriguing...

EA

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