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Catch A Star

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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace


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Catch A Star


the night began
to write love letters
to the moon
she strung words
tied them tightly
sent them on balloons
took each gently
turning all over
to the breeze
openingly sending him
all she was
on the invisible seas
one by one
he caught them
forever shared are ours
scattered them
to read again
changing them to stars

Iím not disappointed,  I never expected anything from you.

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 11-01-2002 10:34 PM       View Profile for Joyce Johnson   Email Joyce Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyce Johnson

This is a lovely picture.  Joyce
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(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, may all your dreams come true and become stars beaded in the eternity bed of your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise


3 posted 11-01-2002 11:19 PM       View Profile for CSKpoet   Email CSKpoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CSKpoet

Wow! this is great!..such a romantic concept..
Loved it, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

the_loner_23
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4 posted 11-01-2002 11:21 PM       View Profile for the_loner_23   Email the_loner_23   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_loner_23

Beautifully written

Cold hands means a warm heart

jwesley
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Texas . . .


5 posted 11-02-2002 08:38 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

...and 'tis the stars wherein I spread
the words mine heart has said,
for 'tis the stars I know thine eyes see each night,
the stars wherein I know you'll read
these words I send to thee...

jwesley

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Helen, this is such a lovely poem.
Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

~~With  Love  And  Hugs  To  All~~
                  Ethel

Denea Furr
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I have to say that I am definately a Daddy's Girl because we both absolutely love your work.BeAuTiFuL.
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Helen, This one is especially magnificent. Like it a great deal and when re-reading I can see the special sparkling stars. It is great!

Warm Regards,
Pat

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what imagery you give!
gemjop
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yes.
 
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