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Flurries You
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Flurries You |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sweeping snows have always brought silence A sudden blanket of still tranquility Not so in the lake effect Flurries change form Large to fine And frantic Pure White Energy ** **** ** Energy Wild Cold And you … Are like the snows Restless and unpredictable Fleeting in and out impatiently Never still, never tranquil, never sure Sweeping snows to drape eternal silent flames * *** * Copyright Kkh 11/1/02 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love this Kathleen..butI happen to love snow and this did warm my heart...we may get a touch of it tonight or into the morning... well done M |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, I love the way you did this. I love snow, too, but very seldom see any here in Florida. I'd like to see more of it. thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nothing like catching a snowflake....letting it melt in your palm....or falling, landing on an eyelid.... Fun huh? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Kathleen, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, yes, the flurries are unpredictable but may they only suprise you with twinkets of lifes kisses and tokens that will comfort you the long journey there! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Yes this is very beautiful and artful in your presentation! Excellent! I had snow for 25 years where I lived in California, but now I must go to the Big Island of Hawaii if I want the snow. It is awesome!!! Thanks for sharing hugs, Cher Poetry is: |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Aren't you glad you moved to Michigan, Kathy Now you can have all the snow you want... and you do write about it so eloquently that I can tell that you love it... This poem is superb... I especially love the form you used  ~ snowy chipmunk hugsLyra |
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