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Fall from a mountaintop
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Fall from a mountaintop |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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I climb a mountain Up to the sky The ground was red Stained from the past ancient stone crumbles beneath my feet The grains of time slip from my fingers And I fall from a mountaintop Into the future below [This message has been edited by Wind (11-01-2002 07:41 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Climbing to the top to fall down into the future... Enjoyed the perspective, Wind. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
It is true that the best perspective is from above...great write. ThisDiamond |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey, friend.....this is really good. Love To All, Ethel |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Wind~ This is a well written piece. I really enjoyed the perspective of this as well. Very unique and creative thinking. Keep it up!  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yes, let yourself slip and fall off that precipice and glide gracefully into that future that lays a mattress right there to assure a safe soft landing upon! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Thanks guys. Noah, I'll take your advice and bring a mattress next time! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a wonderful poem. |
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