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bslicker
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0 posted 2002-11-01 10:37 AM


rain tears


wetness touching down
upon every leaf
dripping
disappearing
into the ground
washing
feeding
all the world
then behind no-where
out from the gray
the sun
drying
all the rain tears
left behind
Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2002-11-01 10:40 AM


then behind no-where
out from the gray
the sun
drying
all the rain tears
left behind


This is beautiful!!  Thanks for sharing your gift.  

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2 posted 2002-11-01 10:53 AM



There are so many wondrous happenings in the natural world around us---You are one who sees!

EA

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3 posted 2002-11-01 10:54 AM


Thank you, for this gentle refreshing rain.
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4 posted 2002-11-01 10:57 AM


Bernie, I love this. I like the way the sun came out and dried all he tears up.......but, like I read between the lines, tears are necessary at times for growth. Thanks for sharing.
Love To All,
Ethel

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5 posted 2002-11-01 08:49 PM


I seem to be reading those that hold so much truth tonight..nicely expressed Bernie.

M

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6 posted 2002-11-01 11:28 PM


Gentle spirit
thanks every once in a while i get a verse that hits me just great

EA
I live in florida, monsooooooon rains happen all the time, while sitting watching all this happen just got to me. Thank for reading

Midnite
don't forget the sun did come out..
thank you for reading and telling me u did

Ethel
As I do enjoy the things u write, for some reason, u read between what i am really saying, along with what is happening....
thank you dear friend

M
catchy ain't it... opps there's that ain't word.
thank you also dear friend.
Bernie





A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (11-01-2002 11:29 PM).]

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7 posted 2002-11-01 11:47 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love the imagery in this, sweet friend, a rainstorm of beauty downpours in your words and lights the world with diamonds, you always describe such visions so beautifully, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bernie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2002-11-02 08:29 PM


Enjoyed this my friend... very nice

jwesley

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