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This Moment, So Intimate
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This Moment, So Intimate |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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This Moment, So Intimate Hearts whisper in the dark loving tones soothe releasing more than what the body needs~ surpassing what the soul desires. Entwined in rythmic thoughts time of tender savored engraved on eternal walls of memories. Flames of love burn lighting hearts of passion, touching more than just mere serendipitous pleasures each second spent in cherish~ this moment, so intimate when two hearts lie together cradled in the haven of our love.... Revised 11-01-02 If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-01-2002 10:27 AM).] |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
This is SWEET! Only a woman could write something as beautiful as this. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
LJ, well I most certainly have been called worse than a woman.........lol..........so I will take that as a sweet compliment and thanks so much for reading and being so kind! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo romantic, sweet friend, and may true love always cradle you in the clouds of your hears heavens! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh, Donna, this is so sweet. You knew that Noah and I'd love it, being the little ole hopeless romantics that we are. Thanks for sharing with us, sweet Donna. Love To All, Ethel |
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texasrose Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 146 |
I am a hopeless romantic. This is beautiful. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hearts whisper in the dark loving tones soothe releasing more than what the body needs~ surpassing what the soul desires. Entwined in rythmic thoughts time of tender savored engraved on eternal walls of memories. ============================ sensual, serene...contentment defined... sanctuary found in anothers heart... BEAUTIFUL write Donna...love the way you present it with the line breaks and pauses... had to sigh after this one  Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna ~ Gentle, sweet and tender---written extremely well---and in the true spirit of love. Linda |
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