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Spiros Zafiris
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0 posted 2002-11-01 03:15 AM


effortlessly, the spirit glides
an eye blinks
and He sees the actions and
entire histories of countless people

He notifies other spirits
who are not particularly paying
attention, should Their charges
be in some sort of trouble

He makes a circle with an arm,
sending a message to Mother Earth,
and She responds by cleansing
a sick man, in a room, alone

     ****   ****   ****

..circa 2002..Copyright 2002 Spiros Zafiris
..poem archived in several other sites

© Copyright 2002 Spiros Zafiris - All Rights Reserved
Walter Poe
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1 posted 2002-11-01 05:39 AM


I wasn't quite sure how to look at this and i thought may as well be jealous so well written definatly my kind of poem very awe inspireing image plainly described  

The very deep did rot: O Christ!
That ever this should be!
Yea, slimy things did crawl with legs
Upon the slimy sea.

Spiros Zafiris
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2 posted 2002-11-01 06:24 AM


.Walter Poe../\.thank you, for reading my poem; i appreciate your kind words..

../\..Spiros

-------------calm seas---------

LngJhnAg
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3 posted 2002-11-01 08:33 AM


There are times when the only explanation is in your poem.  You captured that feeling very well.  Great presentation, Spiros.
Spiros Zafiris
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4 posted 2002-11-01 12:11 PM


.LngJhnAg../\..thank you for reading my poem and for taking the time to comment; i appreciate your kind words..

../\..Spiros


----------------calm seas---------

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2002-11-01 08:57 PM


an eye blinks and if  not careful one would miss this meaningful poem..you have a calming way with words

M

garysgirl
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6 posted 2002-11-01 09:02 PM


Spiros, you do have a way with words. I love your poetry. Thanks for sharing.

Love To All,
Ethel

Spiros Zafiris
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7 posted 2002-11-01 10:50 PM


..nakdthoughts../\.. + garysgirl../\..

..thank you very much for reading my poem;

very kind, your comments../\..Spiros


---------------rivers of peace-----

Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2002-11-02 07:49 PM




(sigh) It is always important to remain attentive so you don't know what you're missing in case a blink can be fatal! (sigh) This is well-said, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Spiros, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunshine
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9 posted 2002-11-03 10:18 AM



There is a great deal of peace
to be found in this, if one will
simply sit, and listen...

well done, Sir...

Spiros Zafiris
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10 posted 2002-11-03 01:04 PM


..Mistletoe Angel../\.. + Sunshine../\..

..thank you much for commenting on my poem;
i appreciate, a lot, your kind words..

./\..Spiros

-----------------Kindness------

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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11 posted 2002-11-03 04:08 PM


Hello Spiros

I really enjoyed reading your words and I'll certainly look forward to reading more.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2002-11-03 06:32 PM


One way to keep your spirit guides' attention is through meditation. It works for me!

I have enjoyed the poems of yours that I have read thus far. This was no exception.

Earth Angel

Enchantress
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13 posted 2002-11-03 06:54 PM


Your poetry is so completely relaxing...
and so very much appreciated.
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

Spiros Zafiris
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14 posted 2002-11-03 07:58 PM


..Suetang../\..Earth Angel../\..
+ Enchantress../\..

..thank you for the very kind comments; i'm

pleased you like my poem../\..Spiros

-----------------calm seas-------

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