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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-10-31 09:50 PM




© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-31 10:13 PM


A place I have walked in poetic dreams..
of waterfalls roaring and crystal streams..

Nicely done KJ...

Madame Chipmunk
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2 posted 2002-10-31 10:37 PM


frozen liquid, crystal streams
waterfalls of icy dreams...

sorry... I just couldn't help it Karilea...
You are an inspiration!
and this is a ~ frozen chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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3 posted 2002-11-01 11:03 AM


In endless dreams of life's sweet whirl
floating in crystals streams
forever swirled


Beautiful and inspiring.  umm.......I couldn't help myself either.  Perfect Sunshine.

LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
4 posted 2002-11-01 11:11 AM


ooooo! Let's collaborate on this poem!

I see my fat kitty in insolent repose
Upon the forbidden kitchen counter
I'd love to crystalize her from tail to nose
And make it look like that's how I found her.

But Lorelei knows me far too well,
She sees through me like a pane of glass
She'd chastise me (that's give me hell)
And finish with a kick in the pants.

OK - Karilea - It's your turn now!  lol

BTW - I love your poem - short and sweet

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2002-11-01 11:37 AM


see what you inspire in others???
we were doing so well till the pirate came in...rofl
AHEM...LONG JOHN!!!!!

Ms K....now youve got a moth turning green at your technological talents as well as your poetic


and? you do know this is a moth poem...
a definate "pretty blue flame"  and a keeper.

Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining.

John O'Donohue
Conamara Blues

NewEnglandlazurlu
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6 posted 2002-11-01 12:30 PM


I'll
light
the candles
You
bring
the wine.

We'll
share
the night
glowing
in the
crystal
reflections.

Well, it just popped out .... see how inspiring you are Karilea. I think my hubby's going to love this idea!!

Beautiful crystal graphic and words....Hugs, Marti

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Realms of Light
7 posted 2002-11-01 12:47 PM


For all around us,
I sense there's more,
And this I do decry,
There's more to heaven
And earth, my friend,
Than that which meets the eye!

--And no one knows that better than you do!

EA
  

scorpio
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right...there
8 posted 2002-11-01 01:22 PM


A prism can take a single ray of light and create a rainbow...you took a thought and did the same thing...beautiful

...believe what your heart feels...

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Canada eh.
9 posted 2002-11-01 02:26 PM


Exquistely beautiful Karilea!
Love this...may I keep it?
~Hugs YOU!~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

Martie
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10 posted 2002-11-01 04:09 PM


Karilea

That's because you look with sunshine.  You do make it beautiful!

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Gaia
11 posted 2002-11-01 04:38 PM


I love the power of your crystallized thoughts.
Now, if we concentrate all that crystal sunlight onto that kitty kicker's rear.....

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
12 posted 2002-11-01 04:40 PM


This is beautiful, Sunshine!
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ireland
13 posted 2002-11-01 04:44 PM


A beautiful snap shot.

The ladders of life that we scale merrily Move mysteriously around So that when you think you're climbing up, man In fact you're climbing down-Nick ca

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14 posted 2002-11-01 07:09 PM


"Looking through the bent backed tulips
To see how the other half live
Looking through a glass onion."
-- Beatles, White Album, track three

that's what this reminded me of...

gorgeous Kari...

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