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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-10-31 09:09 PM


Becoming Weak
~ By Sue ~

These tears I sometimes shed
Do not come from emotional pain
They are tears from so many fears
Fears from which I can not explain

I wonder where I will be
When the weather turns very cold
Will I be able to stay here
Like I was told

Or is the street where I will be
Where there is no warmth
Will there ever be a place
For me here on this earth

He drained me dry of everything
Before he walked out me
Now that I am all crippled up
I am overcome with fear completely

And if that was not bad enough
My car quit running too
With no way to get to work
I do not know what I can do

It is such a struggle for me
To hang on to the strength
I have tried to carry inside
I think I am becoming weak

10-31-02



© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2002-10-31 09:43 PM


you WILL get through this  Sue...I  have and still am working my way out of the  hole...keep trying...that's all I can say..it WILL get better

hugss
M

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
2 posted 2002-10-31 10:46 PM


Maureen is right, Sue... I have faith that you will get through this... and we are all praying for you...
This reminds me of the little story about the man who thought he was cursed because he had no shoes, until he met a man who had no feet...
You DO have feet... and so you will get through this ordeal, just like I will get through mine... and we will support each other with love
~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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3 posted 2002-11-01 11:56 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, yes, you CAN do it, hang in there, sweet friend, as the angels are guiding you during this difficult time and with your golden heart you will grow stronger than ever before! We all send angel hugs your way, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-11-02 02:51 AM


Sue, these poems you are writing are breaking my heart....there is so much pain (not only physical, either). I pray for you every day.
I wish so much that there was more I could do for you. Thanks.
~~Love  And  Hugs~~
      Ethel

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