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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-10-31 01:09 PM


Torpid temptings
flames aspire
lick the pot
of all desire
spread the fire
so it won't burn
the essences
of lessons learned...

Too many clouds
have crossed my moon
too many voices
singing tunes
crowding harmonies
of head
a footbridge built
from bones of dead.

I summon
principalities
yearning equal
to my need
I dig a hole
to plant the seed--
a hole within
the midst of me.

I am the ground
in frozen chill,
as winter lingers
fighting till.

I am the earth.
I am the sky.
I am this flame
of teasing fry...

A chalice now
in toast of love:
what lies below
reflects above.



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1 posted 2002-10-31 01:16 PM




(smiles) This is a wonderful witches brew of a poem, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You truly are an alchemist of words and fancy, sweet friend, abracadabra, you've got a keeper, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-10-31 02:07 PM


Hauntingly awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
3 posted 2002-10-31 03:25 PM


and you're cute too... imagine that.
esclandre
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4 posted 2002-10-31 03:28 PM


"I summon
principalities
yearning equal
to my need
I dig a hole
to plant the seed--
a hole within
the midst of me."

This line was the crux of the poem for me. It limned the walkways up to the home that is in your mind with bright lights for those outside to guide by. Appreciated.

Esclandre

Je le Rêve, je Pleure
I dream, I cry

[This message has been edited by esclandre (10-31-2002 03:29 PM).]

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-10-31 04:35 PM


I love your choice of words here, Karen... it really spoke the witchy speak....
cackle cackle cackle...
~ hugs from the chipwitch

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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6 posted 2002-10-31 05:00 PM


I have told you before - you write good girl!

       
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