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A Kiss in Wait
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A Kiss in Wait |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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A Kiss in Wait I remember those times when you were a kiss in wait. When a brush of a hand stirred the time, making me wish to hold onto it, not letting it become the past. It was unclear, a losing battle, a winning one for you when that evening, our lips touched and since then yours and only yours can make time stand still for me. Some say the eyes are the soul I say your lips...press mine. M *inspired by JamesM...and my response to him "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
the thrill of the chase and then the capture...and how some lose their desire after the capture and may find themselves wondering, where did that original feeling take off to? |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am lucky though, that feeling like the first time remains and each time...I hold onto the feeling until the next time..*s M |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Very nice, Interesting sonnet of unusual style Enjoyed the read Gloom |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you  I always look forward to that first kissM didn't think of this as a sonnet though |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's amazing how you are so like me, you write what I want to say or what I feel sometimes. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Good for you, Naked one! I'm glad things are coming along. That was a nice poem, too. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Seems you have found someone very special. Hold on tight. I enjoyed reading this; thank you. Hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Ah M this is just beautiful Bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Very lovely write Maureen. Sometimes the first kiss is like the next and next and next.........you get the point........lol. Well done. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling heart there is always a joy and a certain frisson of anticipation when I read your wonderful poems. You combine exquisite skill with perfect flow do I love this, you have to know I really do. Outstandingly well written and beautifully constructed this is absolutely fabulous I love it utterly utterly utterly   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, always hold that special someone close to your heart and may each kiss feel just like the magic of the first, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I like this one, especially the last line. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, friend, it sounds to me like love is in the air???Very good!! Nothing compares with love, does it? Love To All, Ethel |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Yes indeed it does sound like love is in the air. You be careful now. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
'tis naught but the heart that's caught the taste of love upon the lips of thine desire... jwesley |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
nakdthoughts, tis a kiss that stirs the fire and lifts the senses ever higher but tis a love both pure and true in essence that will capture you Wonderful write, you are the mistress of compacted emotion. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown [This message has been edited by Kethry (11-03-2002 07:14 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WynterGal~ AWESOME write~ You grabbed a moment-of-inspire and held on tight~ Beautiful~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Maureen It's so nice to read your beautiful words of love again. I hope all is well with you. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
passing shadows ...well maybe you are my twin..although much younger *s How could that be? LngJhnAg...hey this naked one is feeling good...it's about time wouldn't you say??? Thanks and hug that wife of yours... M NewEnglandlazurlu, everyone in my life is special to me.. thank you Marti M |
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