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Kristine
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0 posted 2002-10-31 01:39 AM


FuNNY HoW


Lost in my mind...
Nothing else seems to matter...
Lost in the world...
Nothing else to gain...
But the life of another and the pain...

How do I start a new beginning...
When all I do is attempt by dreaming...
Love lost and love gained...
In the hours that went by...Day by day...
All washed by thunder and rain....

A lover lost...Is what I want to find...
A lover lost...Is the only thing on my mind...

He took a part of me...
That no other man has...
In his eyes...
I thought I saw a love that would always last...

Giving him my all was wrong...
For he hurt me and showed I ain't strong...
In this heart of mine...
There's a light too bright to see...
I only left this light for him, burning in me.





Sometimes Love is like awkward poetry, the words may not be just right
but when love comes freely from the heart the message sings!

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1 posted 2002-10-31 01:43 AM


sad but beautiful, I can relate.
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2 posted 2002-10-31 02:26 AM


good write, lots of feeling

Bernie

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3 posted 2002-10-31 02:33 AM


Kristine, this was a beautiful poem. A lot of emotion and feeling was shown through. Thanks for sharing your heart.

Love To All,
Ethel

Kristine
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4 posted 2002-11-02 02:18 AM


Thank you all for your kind reply
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