A Sweet Passionate Love Song

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garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-10-31 01:01 AM

A  sweet  passionate  love  song,  I
really  love  to  hear
It's  so  nice  to  listen  to,  makes
me  feel  you  near

Even  when  you're  far  away,  and  I  hear
the  music's  soft  sound
I  lay  my  head  back,  close  my  eyes,  and
feel  your  presence  around

I  feel  your  hand  gently  take  mine  as  I
stand  to  my  feet
You  take  me  in  your  arms,  hold  me  real
close,  oh,  it  feels  so  sweet

As  we  dance  real  close  around  the  room  it
feels  like  Heaven  to  me
Like  this  forever,  just  us  together,  how
we  wish  we  could  be

The  sweet  love  song  ending,  back  to  reality,
then  I   hear   the   telephone   ringing
Reluctantly  pick  it  up,  I  say  hello,  and  the  same  love
song,  I  hear  your  loving  voice  singing

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-31-2002 02:18 AM).]

Radrook
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since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

1 posted 2002-10-31 02:13 AM

Nobody's ever loved me that way!

Love is such an all-encompassing emotion.
It envelops us and makes every moment a precious treasure to be protected and saved as a memory.

Enjoyed the read!
God bless!

[This message has been edited by Radrook (10-31-2002 02:13 AM).]

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-10-31 02:17 AM

Radrook, thanks for the sweet, heartfelt reply. I appreciate it very much.

Love To All,
Ethel

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

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3 posted 2002-10-31 02:21 AM

Ain't it great

enjoyed

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-10-31 02:30 AM

Oh, yeah, Bernie. Love sure is great. The person and the emotion takes over your complete being.
Thanks for your reply.

Love To All,
Ethel

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

5 posted 2002-10-31 03:20 AM

..garysgirl../\..very songlike; very nice; especially like the last stanza..

../\..Spiros

---------------songlike-----

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2002-10-31 03:32 AM

Spiros, thanks very much for reading my poem. I'm glad that you liked it.

Love To All,
Ethel

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-10-31 08:11 AM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, I also write songs and try singing and I would love to write albums-worth of ones for my Joanna! (kiss on cheek) May you and your love forever sing happy love songs like baby sparrows and doves, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2002-10-31 09:59 AM

Thank you, Noah, for your sweet reply. To me, all your poems about your love for Joanna could be sweet love songs. They are all so loving and heartfelt. Thanks Noah.

Love to All,
Ethel

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2002-10-31 05:50 PM

Fantastic...James

Robert Adamson
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since 2002-10-21

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10 posted 2002-10-31 06:56 PM

You express a love story like Celine sings God Bless America. Thank you.

etoodog

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

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11 posted 2002-10-31 09:28 PM

Awwww this is so sweet. You know, there was a time I felt this way too. I am so happy for you.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

12 posted 2002-10-31 10:04 PM

garysgirl - very sweet and very touching...

BC

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
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13 posted 2002-10-31 10:43 PM

A lovely poem, Ethel... and I especially loved the little surprise at the end

~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2002-11-01 10:59 AM

Lovely Ethel. The sounds of love are wonderful aren't they?? Hugs

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

15 posted 2002-11-01 07:56 PM

James.....thanks so much for reading
my poem and for your reply.
I appreciate it.

Robert...Thank you. What a compliment!!!
I love her singing.

Sue....you're so sweet. I believe
you'll have someone you feel this
way about again. Soon, I hope.

Bill....thanks!! You're so sweet.
I love your poems!!

Lyra...Thanks so much. I'm glad you
liked it, sweet lady.

Donna....oh yes. The sounds of love
sure are beautiful. Thank you.

Thanks to all of you for your
sweet replies.
Love To All,
Ethel

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

16 posted 2002-11-02 11:37 AM

Smiling..........here...

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

17 posted 2002-11-02 11:42 AM

Thanks so much, Karilea, for reading
my poem. Like PoetdeVine wrote in her
poem...I feel so small amongst you
talented "giants in poetry" around here.
I appreciate all of you sweet people
reading my poems and for your heartfelt
replies. Thank you.

~With Love And Hugs~
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-02-2002 11:47 AM).]

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