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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2002-10-30 11:22 PM


While mowing the lawn
I ran through spider webs
I was like yuck
Let my friend check
For creepy, crawling critters
I run for the house
Pound on the door
My friend opens up
And I beg her to check
For the 8legged critter
That might have gotten on me
She looked me over
Then she said no
So I went back to work
And mowed the grass some more


Cold hands means a warm heart

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-10-30 11:32 PM




(sigh) Oh my gosh, I do remember this, I too encounter this dilemma when pulling weeds on the front lawn and going between the porch and the grass and sticking my hair into one of those contraptions! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Radrook
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2 posted 2002-10-31 02:18 AM


Darned critters!
I gotta be sweeping corners cause they wanna set up house in my house too! They ain't got no respect for a people's privacy! There goes one right now!

Enjoyed the read!
God Bless!

[This message has been edited by Radrook (10-31-2002 02:19 AM).]

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3 posted 2002-10-31 02:22 AM


I am the oddball who actually likes spiders.
As long as they are in someone else's house or yard, that is.

garysgirl
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4 posted 2002-10-31 02:47 AM


Julie, this is cute. I liked it. Thanks for sharing.


Love To All,
Ethel

Spiros Zafiris
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5 posted 2002-10-31 03:10 AM


..the_loner_23../\..very lyric, complete poem; enjoyed reading..

../\..Spiros

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VAS
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6 posted 2002-10-31 02:37 PM


Don't you just hate that...Those things fly around on the breeze, for miles, if you please, or don't please.

Someone went on a zero hunt, and don't think it's not appreciated. Thanks loner!

Sure enjoyed this one here! Glad you reposted it, I didn't catch it in 22.

Get my pun?

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Corinne
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7 posted 2002-10-31 03:08 PM


Yeah, them spiders can really be creepy!

Cor

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