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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2002-10-30 09:54 PM



~ *** ~

Archetypal truths,
Common to all religions
--Images divine.

~ *** ~


© Copyright 2002 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-10-30 10:59 PM




(sigh) Oh Linda, this is beautiful and so very true, and that to me is also a blessing, for though we all share different beliefs in this world, there is an archetype and common creed within them all so that gives me the inevitable impression that with that in mind harmony is possible and can happen for us all! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Radrook
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2 posted 2002-10-31 01:57 AM


Cool Haiku.
A very challenging form.
Very well written!
Thanks for sharing!

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2002-10-31 08:31 AM


Noah ~

That was a very eloquent reply--full of caring and wisdom.

~ You are very special --don't change a feather on your wings!

Linda

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2002-10-31 08:38 AM


Radrook ~

If these Japanese short poems are done well, they can convey a great deal using an economy of words. I find that they really work my brain but it is very rewarding when they come out the way I intended. There are several Pip poets who are absolutely masterful at writing these--check them out.

Thank you!

EA

VAS
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5 posted 2002-10-31 09:23 AM


well done senyru!

archetypal---impressive

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2002-10-31 09:35 AM


VAS ~
I am still grateful for your informing me  of the difference between a haiku and a senryu, when I joined Passions. Every time I write "Senryu" next a title I post, I think of you! Thanx again!

EA

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7 posted 2002-10-31 09:50 AM


A simple and timeless truth. ThisDiamond
Nan
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8 posted 2002-10-31 10:07 AM


Mankind's global truths
Seeds of commonality
Lessons to be learned

garysgirl
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9 posted 2002-10-31 10:16 AM


Linda, I read this when you first posted it,
but didn't leave a reply, because I honestly
didn't know what one of these "things" were.
I'm glad that you didn't know either when you
first came here to Passions. Maybe there is
hope for me after all...about the "TECHNICAL
SIDE"  of this wonderful world of poetry.
Thanks , dear Lady, (and everyone else) for
all this wonderful stuff you're teaching me.
It's wonderful to have such loving and
compassionate teachers.


Love to All,
Ethel

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2002-10-31 10:18 AM


ThisDiamond ~  Yes indeed!---and I believe
            that ALL "truths" are "timeless"

Nan ~ Impressive poetic reply!--both in
      message and in form! Thank you!


~ May you both have a fun time tonight--no matter which way you choose to spend it! ~

Linda

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2002-10-31 10:28 AM


Ethel ~

The longer I'm with Passions, the more I learn! What a poetic feast I enjoy everyday--and it doesn't cost a dime--now that is truly divine!

Ron, if you're listening--THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!

~ As another PIP poet wrote in his reply to me--"read, read, read, write, write, write"

~ haunted halloween hugs ~

Linda

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12 posted 2002-10-31 10:30 AM


Linda, especially the commonality of angels!

Loved this ... and thank you for the 'new word.'


Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

Earth Angel
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13 posted 2002-10-31 11:27 AM



Haunted Halloween, WitchBitch! er, Marti!

Thank you! A couple of days ago, I wrote 33 senryus in 2 hours! When my muse says "WRITE!!!"--I write!!! hehe

~ Don't forget our plans to scare all the little kiddies tonight! Get your broom ready!

Linda

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